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Jay and Carly Book 2, Chapter 14

🕑 Added 2021-04-28 17:18:39 +0000 UTC

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MacDaddyD

Whatever the case, I’m sure it’ll be great

My only issue is that I've sort of set it up for being in 3-4 years. So I'm left with two options A) finish up "book 2" of Jay and Carly then time jump 3-4 years (which could be interesting but puts this story off for a long time) or, B) time jump and write it as a stand-alone story "soonish" Decisions, decisions.

MacDaddyD

Ok, you have my attention.

They're not married. I need to fix it. Thanks! I'm definitely not gonna skip over THAT wedding and the fireworks it's guaranteed to have ;)

MacDaddyD

Yes! Jay and Carly time! I especially enjoyed the little cliffhanger at the end. Also excited for the return of Natalie that you teased. I don’t recall Hideo and Sherry getting married, maybe I missed it, but I don’t recall that being brought up at any point in previous chapters. Either way, great job working in Aimee, I know you were struggling with it for a while. She’s going to be a nice addition to the story.


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