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Chapter 24 of Jay and Carly!
🕑 Added 2019-11-14 22:07:05 +0000 UTCHope you enjoy guys. The interaction between Je
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J B
I like the two combined, personally.
I had a similar thought. Ultimately, I felt like the two subsections would have been too short plus the second one would have been almost entirely sex (which I've been trying to avoid). I could stretch both of them out a little but I'm not sure that makes it better... I don't know. I'll think about it. Curious what the rest of you think?
MisterSunshine1029
Excellent as always; That being said, I think maybe this one has too much going on for just one chapter? Maybe consider splitting into 2 chapters, with the cliffhanger right when Rebeccah calls Jay for help?
I think this might be the best chapter you’ve written so far. I’m loving the way Louise is fitting in with Carly, and so happy to have Krysten back with J&C. Now gimme the next chapter! ;P
