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A Feast for Dominion (Illeona's Rise)
🕑 Added 2021-03-01 07:01:02 +0000 UTCA prequel to my other story "First Night, Unwavering Commitment". This continues my fantasy bent and introduces Goddess Illeona. She's part of the mythology behind my "Bound and Fattened" series and you'll be seeing her pop up as we move forward. I felt like she needed her own story and I wanted to establish her character.
I'm not sure how this turned out. I edit, prune, and rewrite so damn much that I begin to internalize the story and lose objectivity.
Please let me know what you guys think.
Comments
Haha, what kind of friend indeed!
Heyson
What kind of friend/subscriber/follower would I be if I pushed and bugged you so badly that you made a Patreon just to escape the badgering 😅
I'm glad you enjoyed it. I know some folks love the fantasy style and some don't, so I try to appeal to both. This was a fun one to write. Thanks for always commenting and giving your feedback. It's very much appreciated. I'd love it if more people chimed in.
Heyson
I love it! You’re proving to be such a versatile writer and I love the variety you’re putting out. Keep up the great work, Beeboz!
Jethro, you're the best. Thank you! It was a bad export. I recreated the file and re-uploaded another one. It should be fixed now. Sorry man.
Jethro
Bravo! Its a great story, and i hope we get to see what three months of gorging and sex do to her. The story repeats itself half way through so id suggest an edit but besides that its perfect
