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Demise of a Cheerleader - Chapter 3

🕑 Added 2021-04-14 23:39:00 +0000 UTC

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Bless you Halrion! You don’t realize how much effort went into that line. I rewrote 5 times. It’s so small and such a fun detail and I just appreciated that noticed and liked it. Thank you so much for your kind words. Welcome, it’s so good to have you!

Halrion

This is fantastic! Loving Alyssa's arrogance and greed, and the interplay with Suzy. You're a superb storyteller and describer too. The image Christine, illuminated by her cellphone, floating through the midnight like a ghostly ethereal is delightfully atmospheric.

Thanks Casey! I appreciate you commenting and I'm glad you enjoyed it! More to come!

Casey

Wow so good. I can’t wait for the next chapter

Thanks adaf! Next chapter is going to be fun!

Cant wait for the next chapter I can see its building into something great!


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