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Sentinel - 1

🕑 Added 2025-06-19 14:00:10 +0000 UTC

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Waler97

As Max Horrichs said,it's a nice start to a story other than identity issues with several other characters through the chapter being referred to as Clark

Waler97

A specific paragraph near the end of the chapter makes me feel like you searched every instance of the word I(meaning self) was searched and replaced with Clark. "We are the Teen Team," Robot didn't bother acknowledging the others. "Atom Eve, Boomer, Dupli-Kate, and Identi-Cal. Clark am Robot."

Max Horrichs

besides that, this is a nice start to a story

Max Horrichs

hi, I think you used 'him' when you meant 'me' a few times, example: "Sentinel," Clark tilted his head in greeting. "Give him a second."


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