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Chapters 53-56

🕑 Added 2025-07-19 19:54:33 +0000 UTC

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Michael Larsen

My god, I wish I drank. I raise a toast to this!

Peter

Yeah. If this continues I am definitely going to unsubscribe.

UMCDaEMON pp

The skills and world is interesting but 99% of these characters are just unbelievable over the top, people don't behave this way. Like I said 10/10 world building, 0/10 characters, may need a rewrite. Base story is good too. AGAIN rethink dialog and motivations. Will keep reading to see how it develops.


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