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Peia Page Preview Part Two
🕑 Added 2016-09-16 21:19:02 +0000 UTC Not too much to add here that hasn't been said elsewhere. I added more notes onto the page for my flatter, Brellom, to use. I may have gave them the wrong idea for panel 5 though, it's supposed to be ALL space and that swoosh is supposed to be how I track the thickest part of the stars going across it.One other thing to note is that, I've sorta set up in this story that most screens are these 3d holographic thingies and there's some computer manipulation involved that makes it seem like the person is in the same space as you. Like eyes that look at the correct thing, instead of just at their camera. But this, in some instances like here, have the effect of making it look like he's just popping out of the table.
Admiral Senchel (the scarred guy) is almost always shown from the waist up. He doesn't like closeups so much, maybe. But this somewhat exacerbates his tendency to look like he's just popping up from the table.
Oh shoot, looking at this I forgot the extra screen in Panel 5 too... more things to fix.
