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Beta-Collie: "Luna's Interlude" (Revised Version 2023)
🕑 Added 2023-10-24 01:11:37 +0000 UTC
Back in 2019 I posted this story: https://www.patreon.com/posts/beta-collie-ii-1-25045753 which only now I decided to re-work since back then it was conceived more as a draft and written like a script in present tense, which in hindsight was a really bad idea.
I also didn't explore much of the character's feelings through certain key scenes, so with the small help of AI tools to edit some areas of the original story is that I decided to give it a try. I think now is more pleasant and interesting to read, let me know what you think.
I may re-work the following Beta-Collie stories so I get the drive to continue where I left it. But if not, that's alright too. Until next time! :)
Leo
