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Artemis's Bow C1P8

🕑 Added 2017-03-28 00:31:20 +0000 UTC
Artemis's Bow C1P8

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Jenny Koda

Awwrf... thank you for the thoughts! It really, REALLY helps me to know where people are at with the story, how they feel about it and the characters and what their thoughts are as to how it should progress. I've had a couple of people ask me, "If Artemis gets fat, won't that change the dynamic of the story?" And I want to say that yes, if she went from the size she is now, to the size Texas is, it would drastically change the tone and pacing of the story. The nice thing is, that that's not going to happen. Like Maple's Story, I'd really like to pace out Artemis' gain, it's going to be something that people have to work on, if they want her to achieve levels of fatness like we've seen on the Wayfarer crew. <3

Alex Kay

I like that Artemis is fairly strait-laced when it comes to her own indulgences, resisting Demeter's antics. It reflects well upon her as a captain - that of strong will and discipline - and to be the master of her own destiny, despite the.. peculiarities of her plus-sized crew. Her resistance to Demeter and the crew's shenanigans adds another dimension to the story, helping it stay fresh. Artemis' "straight man" perspective is also a useful frame of reference for the reader. Besides, whilst she may not fold to Demeter, that's not to say some of its influence couldn't be rubbing off on Artemis. I feel it be more fitting for Artemis to discover her "leanings" for herself, not necessarily having it thrust upon her. Similar to Maple in a way. A good captain ensures that the needs of her crew are met.. :3

Jenny Koda

Eee thank you ;u;

Naomi Firewind

My Weight goes to A, Gotta fatten Artemis

NackV

Ps, absolutely loved this round

NackV

I'll put my vast weight on A, Artemis

Jenny Koda

Aah thank you! Yeah I loved writing that interaction xD <3

Dornam

Wow! Fantastic chapter! Also, that was great having Aava and Texas know each other. Totally silly, cute, and unexpected.

Jenny Koda

Thank you so much ;u;

Tach0012

Really loving this story :D


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