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Artemis' Bow C1P9

🕑 Added 2017-04-17 16:44:11 +0000 UTC
Artemis' Bow C1P9

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Vulpix

E

Maylow

*I. ...The fearsome tactician skipped grammar class it seems.

Maylow

As a fearsome tactician, O choose E

Jack Moore

Mhhm, hopefully for a long while!~ I really hope it wins just to see THAT tum sloshing about and perhaps getting stuck in doors. <3

Alex Kay

Whoops, yeah I meant E.. >.>

Alex Kay

Ah of course, that explain it. Cheers for clarifying! ^.^

Jenny Koda

Haha thank you! I'll make sure your weighted vote is counted <3

Jenny Koda

Mmm me too~ plus who knows how long she'd be carrying THAT tum around for? <3

Jenny Koda

Hey there! Good question - so with weighted votes I ask that patreons record there preference here, for each vote, or on FA if their patreon/FA names line up. The Wayfarer crew won conventional voting, weighted votes pushed Artemis' gain up an additional 2 points <3

Jenny Koda

Your votes are counted! <3

Jenny Koda

Stuck is nice as heck <3

Jenny Koda

You mean E~? And yeah, important in this case is that the AI *shouldn't* be able to do things independently of what the crew wants to happen, and the crew should in all cases have absolute control. I wonder if that's what's happening now~

Jenny Koda

Hey there! Insightful comment, you’ve raised a lot of good points/concepts and I thought I’d take some time to properly address where I’m coming from, within the realm of this fiction. I wanna make clear that I absolutely understand your viewpoint, and that if I had an AI who maintained/ran aspects of my personal life I’d want to be pretty sure it wasn’t going to run amok as well! So let’s start with AI as they stand in the universe of Maple’s Story, The Rendering Pit, FOBoJ and Artemis’ Bow (I really ought to find a name for this universe...) In-Universe, sentient AI are outlawed. It’s heavily against the law to develop any AI that outright possesses free will, or the ability to develop and pursue its own agenda. Pilot-link AI have become almost an exception to the rule. Initially developed to ease trading and navigation among the stars, these AI are equipped with bonus features that allow them to fully integrate within any ship-like environment and manage, on a personal level, the lives and schedules of the crew within. This is completely voluntary, it’s basically opt-in to have someone who is there to help you with your schedule, open and shut doors, prepare your meals, clean up after you, warm your bathwater, all that jazz. The pilot-link AI is hardwired into your brain and programmed to anticipate your every need. It filters advertisements you don’t want to see from the network, it connects you with the friends you want to talk to, it prepares the food you feel like eating, in many cases, independent of your own instruction and - typically? This is a good thing! The pilot-link AI is SUPPOSED to be an extension of your will, nothing it should ever do would be something you don’t want to happen in the first place. This begins to fall apart in cases like Maple’s Story ( <a href="http://www.furaffinity.net/gallery/smallergod/folder/173661/Maples-Story/" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">http://www.furaffinity.net/gallery/smallergod/folder/173661/Maples-Story/</a> ) , where although Maple wanted to remain slender because of societal expectations (there is a heavy taboo on the overweight in-universe, since metabolic medication is often incredibly easy to obtain) but the AI picked up upon a deeper, stronger desire to eat. In this case, Syn, Maple’s AI, provided Maple with the opportunity to indulge in her secret fetish, it gave her pathways to gluttony she wouldn’t have taken by herself and although it ended up with her being huge, I think there’s a strong part of Maple that almost longs to return to the days her body was swaddled in blubber. And in cases like with Artemis, Demeter will pick up upon not only Artemis’ own subconscious desires, but also the conscious desires of her crew. Aava for example, was easy to pin down as a fat lover, and since Demeter isn’t programmed to judge, the next step is to enable. Aava, Alex and Artemis all have the option of saying ‘no’. It’s important that in every case on their ship, the fattening has been entirely voluntary (although Aava hadn’t expected she was in Augmented Reality and not Virtual Reality). So I definitely wanna make it clear that I didn’t write an essay to bash on your opinion, far from it! I really like that people are engaging with the story on this kind of level! It’s just wonderful, as a writer and creator, to see this kind of response! So I figured I’d give you some background lore on the situation and see what you thought! Finally I guess, this is a story with undertones on the nature of AI, when does Demeter stop becoming an it, and start becoming a ‘she’, you know? At the moment the AI is almost like the family’s pet, it wants to do good. It wants to please its masters. But I think the pilot-link AI in particular has a lot of room to develop its own agenda and goals, and watching that happen (if it does!) would be interesting in my opinion. <3

Jenny Koda

Haha I know what you mean, seeing Artemis plump up would be great, but stuck scenarios are awesome <3

Jenny Koda

Aaah thank you! I was so nervous when this came out, glad people like it <3

Jori En

I have vote B this round. Although all of the options sound like fun too, especially E!

Alex Kay

Aaall a matter of perspective :3 Space is a weird place. Perhaps in this sector of the galaxy being massively fat is in vogue, lol.

Visha Oakwood

That's even worse!

Alex Kay

It's interesting that Artemis' crew are actively facilitating the "issue", so it's not just a just a case of a runaway AI per se. Picked A because why not. A little group scene would be fun. edit: Dammit, I meant E! >.

Jack Moore

I'm all for D. Big fluff slosh dragon.(Anyone say waterbed? x3)

Alex Kay

Not that I mind how this part went down, but didn't the option with the Wayfarer crew win the last vote? Again, it's not a big deal (it was a slim victory anyway) but it would be good to know where voters stand with the story.

Naomi Firewind

I'm on A

Firefox

For reasons we discussed, I'm voting B on this one, though I could survive if A or E win, also.

Visha Oakwood

I admit, not a fan of A.I. never trust them in any rpg. If I was At he captain I would very much have demetier reset or purged or something every so often. And I wouldn't appreciate my crew tricking me like they did here. I know that's the point of the story but I know for a fact I wouldn't put up with this stuff from my party. They want to become huge that's their business. Leave me out and don't use the A.I. for anything other than business.

vamoris

Same thing for me ^^' Torn between options 'A' and 'E'! And 'B's a close second :3

Athan

Very well done <3 Torn between options 'A' and 'E'! And 'B's a close second :3


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