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Devils and Details p.8 (finale)

🕑 Added 2018-07-18 04:32:40 +0000 UTC

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Jenny Koda

Okay! Having read the whole thing, gotta say I'm impressed! It's something you were writing to have a little bit of fun and it shows, both in the themes presented, and their execution! I enjoyed the tasty lil snippets of this person's life as he continued on a path I think he was destined to go down, and the choice he faced at the end (whether or not it was actually a choice!) was particularly delicious <3

Jenny Koda

Comparisons, measurements, etc are like half of what I do oh no! xD

NackV

Measurements, comparisons to nearby object, comparisons to the scale of the room.

RabidBadger

That's a fair point, I have yet to find a way to do that that I feel good about. Directly quoting numbers or comparing it to objects feels clunky and unsatisfying on that front, but I have yet to think of something else.

NackV

My problem is that while his tactile and sensory language is good, there is a real lack of sense of scale, size comparison, body shape sometimes.

Jenny Koda

I haven't finished reading it yet myself, but if it's anything like the rest of rabid's stories, he's probably enjoying himself at least a little~

Athan

Good ending! Great little series; can't help but feel a bit bad for the guy ^^


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