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Alpha Luna Ch5 Page 11HD
🕑 Added 2015-02-23 19:41:32 +0000 UTC Download the HD version attached to this post. (Includes Spanish and English versions) Comment on the progress of the story here! :D - Feedback is encouraged :), grammar issues, anything since you're the first people to see this page.
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Leonardo Vidal
Gracias a tí por ser un Patrón aquí! :D - No estaba seguro si gente de habla hispana iba a usar esta galeria, por eso todos los pos son en Inglés, de todas formas bienvenido y gracias de nuevo! Te los firmaré sin falta.
Morthrandor
:O Rayos, ¡no lo veía venir! Felicidades por tu comic leo, te sigo desde hace años y me encanta. Ya quiero comprar el tomo 2 cuando salgo y a ver si me lo firmas junto al tomo 1 primera edición :D
Cynfall
I think it still has the same affect no matter which way you word it. Either way, wonderfully done Leo.
Leonardo Vidal
Thanks! The original line in the second frame was "For the young ones" but I wasn't sure if it was a bit weird considering he reffers to Collie.
Cynfall
Nothing wrong with the grammar or structure that I noticed. As for the story....this guy needs to die a painful way >(
