Chapter 83: Scorpion
🕑 Added 2018-04-09 01:24:42 +0000 UTC https://www.fictionpress.com/s/2961893/83/Mother-of-LearningHere it is, the new chapter is finally here! Sorry for the long wait, but at least it is a little longer than usual. Enjoy!
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JDG
People at Domagoj’s work: Why is he so tired every third Monday . . . ?
Bruno Salque
I've got the same feeling
Roman
So I got home and though: "Man, it's Friday.. can it be.. that on Sunday..." And then I checked the date :( Please don't announce another delay..
Domagoj Kurmaic
Added to the editing list.
Domagoj Kurmaic
Added to the editing list.
J H
I think the number one benefit of having the crown is denying QI the crown. He's way too dangerous even without it, but having it gives him like 10x the amount of mana.
Adrien Matricon
Thanks a lot for the chapter! I think I have spotted two typos: "they were apparently a lot less expensive than their own" <= shouldn't this be "expansive" instead? "the treasury wards were though enough" <= shoudln't that be "thorough" instead?
Vanathor
How valuable would the crown be for Zorian compared to Zack?
Daniel
The question I now have will QI somehow be linked to the restarts.
JDG
Oh man oh man, this chapter was so intense. Was QI unable to sense XAS hiding in the orb? If so, could they bring an small army next time to make taking out QI a little easier?
Kristoffer
Jesus, what a cliffhanger! Great chapter, as always.
Paragraph 12: If you started each restart with the ring on you, like the controller was probably supposed to, then that *was* be a minor issue. As it is, it will take *as* a week at minimum to get ahold of it in each restart, and that's after optimizing things
Excellent! Already ready it. Wating for chapter 84. Hurry up and write it already. Ha ha ha...
Daniel I Beer
Excellent chapter, thank you.