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Chapter 87: Agents of the Crown
🕑 Added 2018-07-16 00:07:00 +0000 UTC https://www.fictionpress.com/s/2961893/87/Mother-of-LearningI apologize for the lateness. Still, the new chapter is here! I hope you enjoy it.
Still no worldbuilding post, but I have indeed begun to edit the typos and such in previous chapters. Only two chapters have actually been updated so far, but I have actually done much more than that. I will continue with that, and will hopefully have the entire editing document cleared by next chapter.
Also, I have received a new fanart! You can see it here. It's a drawing of Quatach-Ichl by reddit user u/petrichorE6.
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Dark Prophet
Also found these typos "he almost lose his balance ". I think this should be "he almost lost his balance". "said Zach, laboriously rising to his feel while using" - I think this should be feet "a desert native that has hear about strange toads" - heard "simple physical enhancements that aims to improve the user's strength" - should be aim in the singular "organized and executed was enough to give other pause" - should be "to give others pause "who were immediately consumed by intense desire to" - "who were immediately consumed by an intense desire to" "and it might give then an answer about how Quatach-Ichl" - "them and answer" "Zach said bluntly, cutting him of." - "cutting him off"
Great chapter, thanks! Also found this, "patting the hyra gentle on the flank".
Adrien Matricon
Thanks for the chapter. I might have found a typo: the chapter says "These people are not being sent here as help" but the rest of the dialogue says that they are
Dark Prophet
Great chapter. Loved reading it.
Andrew
Thank you!!
Leaf
Thank you for the chapter :)
Thanks for the chapter!
