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Chapter 92: The Scramble

🕑 Added 2018-11-15 04:01:19 +0000 UTC

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Dark Prophet

His mind magic gave him a big leg up but also Zach is a Combat Specialist and just gave Zorian a huge amount of good stuff. This would have saved Zorian a huge amount of time as he didn't have to hunt it all down himself.

NomadicSoul

So red robe was in the loop for 30 years Zach 34-35 and zorian 5-6. Dang zorians a beast able to go to to toe with red.

Domagoj Kurmaic

I will look into it when I finish the story, yes.

Dark Prophet

It also said that it was not willing to make a deal with Zach as it had no way to stop him leaving as he was the "legitimate controller". In regards to Silverlake I think you are giving her too much credit. She doesn't risk herself unless she has to, Maybe she does think the Primordial will be killed or resealed but if she thinks that someone else will handle it then once she is done releasing the thing she will disappear.

Grumpy

I'm a little confused as to how Zach got out of the timeloop. I thought the primordial told them that it would prevent anyone from leaving via the "natural" method? As to Silverlake, her actions make sense! She left her old self alone because og!Silverlake would kill her as nobody wants primordials running around. Makes immortality hard! Loop!Silverlake's plan is to release the primordial herself while the other loopers are fighting and then help Zorian and co seal it back up.

Matthew M

I'm kind of hoping for some tragedy in the ending, anyone else?

Adrien Matricon

Wow, this makes me feel so many things... Thanks for the chapter! Do you plan to get MoL printed (or even published?) after we reach the end? It's one of my favourite novels ever, and I'd love to own a copy (maybe even gift some to my friends)

wanderer117

Found a typo on my second reading Silverlake shouted, having some distance away from him. should probably be Silverlake shouted, staying some distance away from him.

whooaaahahhahhaha, 4 hours gone ! I love that :D. I love how the small remarks like when Zorian says he'll ask other webs. It is rather innocent to the innocent reader, but after some years of following mol, I'm kind of laughing at the pressure applied by that 'threat'. Great job and thank you ! I don't regret waiting

Dark Prophet

Ahhh that was fun to read! Keep up the good work.

Grond (James)

Ah, I am temporarily appeased.

wanderer117

Great chapter, I was afraid Zac would turn on Zorian as soon as he left the loop due to angle mind control. Small typo "Hey, Kirielle... " he told him with a mischievous smile. should be "Hey, Kirielle... " he told her with a mischievous smile.