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A Strange Old World Ch.17

🕑 Added 2022-04-04 20:19:46 +0000 UTC

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Robs511

Well...not out of nowhere. From his eyes, his family betrayed him first. Don't get me wrong, I'm not supporting his choice, but if my parents lied about my birth (the-boy-who-lived bit), I'd be pretty pissed too. Jacob's decision was an impulsive, angst-filled one. He just had a very unfortunate day where almost everyone shat on him; from feeling insecure about his status, to being put down by Hermione (in his eyes), to now have the only thing he can take pride in (BWL status) being ripped away...the kid just had his world shattered, I could easily imagine a 14 year old angsty boy doing something reckless. Also, I was building up his angst from Ch.16 so I wouldn't say it came out of nowhere either.

Jamie

That's a fair enough statement but him betraying his family out of nowhere just feels really unjustified and ridiculous to me. I do want to add though apart from that the chapter was really good and the action is really entertaining and so far this has definitely been my favourite of the 3 storys

Robs511

Jacob was unconscious throughout the fight. I started his pov with him literally coming back to consciousness. I think you're judging from your omnipotent perspective instead of his eyes.

Jamie

Jacob joing the Dark Lord that just killed his father for no real reason other then his own stupidity really makes no sense and it feels like just the author wanting to make a Sirus Black character for Harry without putting the effort into making it believable which sours a otherwise really great Chapter.


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