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Mystique Soldier Ch.19

🕑 Added 2022-04-08 19:26:26 +0000 UTC

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SSs34TheElf

Yeah I think it’s hard to show character emotional growth without it coming off as rushed and sudden. I think taking your time now with mystique soldier is good. If anything you can do like a training montage for Harry quickly developing his skills and gaining certain perks in the future. Maybe a time skip here or there. I think the slow setup for now here is necessary since this isn’t a time travel Harry that can just do whatever he wants under the pretence of future knowledge.

Ilay Hyams

I do feel like more happened, his thought process feels more realistic and lively and the chapter contained some foreshadowing. Overall, I think for this story this has been the best chapter yet.

SSs34TheElf

Thanks for the chapter! Tonks better hang onto Harry for dear life, she doesn’t know what kind of gem she has. Harry will literally just hard carry if she can keep him haha. Really excited for the dungeons. Kitchen is one, I assume chamber of secrets might be one down the line, maybe the whomping willow or shrieking shack. Keep up the good work!


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