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A Strange Old World Ch.18

🕑 Added 2022-04-14 23:05:24 +0000 UTC

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Robs511

Sorry for the misunderstanding mate but; Important Note*: By 3 chapters, it means 1 chapter from each of my three fics that I update in rotation. ....I'm guessing you didn't read the note?

Josh

I'm confused. I subscribed to read the three new chapters of SOW and stay up to date on the story. FF has chapter 17 up, but now after only one chapter I am being asked to pay for new chapters?

Robs511

;)

Robs511

Thnx mate! And your guess about Lily was close but not quite. It's not split personality exactly, tho more will be eventually revealed.

Gilgamos

Thanks for the chapter

Welltall44

Awesome chapter, though I was really surprised that you already revealed that Harry is the true BWL, under the circumstances, it actually wouldn't make any sense if the truth didn't get out when Voldemort admitted it himself in front of so many witnesses so good on you for that. If I were to take a stab in the dark I can't help but feel like maybe Lily has a dual elemental affinity and somehow her mental trauma has caused a kind of split personality with each personality retaining access to one of their elements, the Positive persona having the Lightning element and the Negative persona having this Void element. I could easily see Lily's story progression being based around ultimately rejoining these 2 personalities back together and Lily's elemental control which she herself had made concerns about not being good enough improving the more she is able to mentally stabilize. Surprisingly it reminds me of a pretty dark Pokemon fic I read over 10 years ago where the strongest pokemon trainers actually mutated and got the power to wield a specific element. In the story, Misty actually had a kind of mental breakdown causing her to literally split into 2 different beings with Misty herself retaining her Water element and her negative personality absorbing her unique Light Affinity. Hell in that story Pokemon Master if I remember the name correctly, Ash gained the unique Dark element BEFORE it had even been created and added by the pokemon creators because the story was created back during Gen 1 I think, LOL. Regardless this was an absolutely great chapter and I am now looking forward to all the stuff you weren't able to fit in the chapter, so keep up the great work.

Grim

Good.

Robs511

Hehe, I'm glad!

Ahmed Ayub

Worth the wait


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