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The Mortal God of Olympus Ch.20

🕑 Added 2022-01-17 17:19:17 +0000 UTC

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Bellerophon

Just because Zeus is a cheating scumbag doesn’t mean the MC has to follow his example. If there’s a god I don’t want to emulate it’s Zeus, the mans a serial rapist and all around narcissistic arsehole. I hope Mikael isn’t going to turn into something similar just because he can’t handle being horny. The lemon was alright I guess, though instead of being dominant he was just rude and cruel. Mikael needs to chill, he comes across as edgy because he seems to hate everything. To make him seem less one dimensional it might be worth lightening up his character softening his outlook.

thevolunteer

I thought the sex scene was good, I’m personally not the biggest fan of degrading sex, hope that doesn’t end up being too much of a recurring thing. The vengeful motivation was fine. 6 or 7/10. Unrelated note, have you thought about tagging your stories and related polls? It’d make it easier to go back through and find old posts to read.

Robs511

For the strangest reason, my autocorrect had listed it as Posieden. Shouldn't happen on pc but I'm glad you pointed it out. And thanks the updated plege!

Robs511

Just himself for now

Ilay Hyams

The E comes before the I in Poseidon and there is only one E in Poseidon. The sex scene was a solid 7 to 8.

Eric Bruner

Does electric healing mean that he can heal others or just himself?

Robs511

Oh man, sorry for the misunderstanding but by 5 advanced chapters it means overall 5 chapters ahead of public. As in, all the three fics included. I updated the Tier info a few days ago cause other people had this confusion as well. I'm glad you like the story, and hope this doesn't make you leave. Have a good day :)

Robs511

The apple will make him completely immortal, thus binding him to Styx laws. If he progresses naturally with his system however, the slightest, most inconsequential part of his soul, will still be mortal, thus creating a loophole where he is concerned. Ik it sounds a little bs but the reason I created this entire 'mortal soul' part was to skip those annoying Greek laws. Though even without the Apple, his progress to True god is gonna be fast. And 7 is pretty solid rating so I'll take it ;

Lord Shiva

I have the same question

Eric Bruner

I'm liking the story but a quick question shouldn't a few more chapters be unlocked or are you going g to upload them later today

Lord Shiva

Eh, when he gets his wings he is gonna be a minor god, then if he eats the apple that’s another 70 levels and then he’s a true god. I assume when he gets to minor god level the golden apple won’t restrict him anymore since he would already be a minor god? As for the sex scene, I didn’t wank to it but I would give it a 7 lol.


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