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Mystique Soldier Ch.10

🕑 Added 2022-01-24 16:45:50 +0000 UTC

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Robs511

There will be, eventually. All of his pairings will be decently fleshed out, no worries. But I'm trying not to rush it and let it flow naturally, as both of their personalities currently does not match well so you won't be getting much development for now.

Robs511

Of course, Harry is apathetic to most of the people around him, and Rose isn't anything special....yet. If anything, she is just a nuisance for him currently. A puzzling nuisance that he couldn't bother to solve.

Robs511

Well Rosalia isn't your typical 11 year old lol. Though not for the reason you might be thinking. I left some hints and stuff for her truer personality, and hopefully you'll like the reveal.

Ilay Hyams

I feel like since Dorea will be entering the final pairing there should be a bit more focus on her.

Platyperry

thevolunteer

Good chapter, my only complaint is Rosalia. She’s 11, not 6. In my experience, most eleven year olds are more concerned with acting mature than anything else. They don’t succeed, of course, but they are trying their hardest to seem that way. I hope you have Harry sorted into Ravenclaw or Slytherin, and have him hang around students about to enter the real world. It’s the only way I see him not going insane.


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