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The Mortal God of Olympus Ch.24

🕑 Added 2022-02-12 16:19:56 +0000 UTC

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NOBADI

Quite a lovely chapter, I enjoyed it quite a lot. If I may, I would recommend you playing a little with POV, just small amounts, like some gods reactions to Heracles battles, or one or two paragraphs of people giving their reactions.

Robs511

I didn't quite forget about them as I did include Ra. I just sort of skimmed over the explanation to make it seem simple. For beings from different mythology, they'll see the same planet (Like earth, Mars etc wouldn't change) but the god representing it will be different. The Greeks are just the default representation as our planets do have greek names. I don't think they have names based on other mythology figures tho. Also, I'm mostly following Greek mytho so...

Ilay Hyams

So the explanation for the universe was cool, I hadn't read anything like that before so points for originality, but you forgot that almost every mythos has sun gods (Lugh, Amaterasu and Indra to name a few). I would be willing to beta for you, I don't have discord but if you are interested I can trade my gmail/insta/whatsapp with you, so just message me.


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