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Mystique Soldier Ch.16

🕑 Added 2022-03-09 17:10:37 +0000 UTC

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Robs511

The slow pace was selected by a poll here on patreon quite a while back. People wanted a detailed Hogwarts experience, and I think the pace is alright for now. After the first couple of months things will naturally speed up without me having to change anything too much. And no, Dungeon won't be a grindfest. Though I might take some time properly introducing it cause I think I have a relatively interesting idea. (As far as Dungeons go lol)

Ouki's Lips

Yeah personally I'm not enjoying the slow pace as much. Imo it should be like 1 webnovel chapter (0.5 patreon chapter) per month of Hogwarts max, not including things like the dueling tournament or resolving the Quirell situation. Moreover when he finally finds the dungeon I hope the story doesn't turn into a grindfest. I personally like how you're narrating the story now, where the gamer system is just a plot device as opposed to being the center focus of the story

Ilay Hyams

The problem with the slow pace is that his growth is not slow so he ends up being way ahead of where the original Harry was in his time. I feel like the bullying of Malfoy is edging towards pure malicousness, he is still a kid at this stage


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