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Mystique Soldier Ch.23
🕑 Added 2022-06-09 02:49:50 +0000 UTCChapter 23- Back to America
Comments
Gerald
I was so looking forward to someone giving him the girlfriend speech but kinda hoping all the older women in his life are a part of the discussion just to add more spice to it instead of something awkward
Gilgamos
Thanks for the chapter
Gilgamos
Thanks for the chapter
Robs511
Yeh I realized too late that I've been completely ignoring Sara's character....by this time, the hints of what she is should've already been clear, had I stuck to my original plans. But I focused more on improving story's pace than side characters and bungled her plot up. This vacation gives a good chance to salvage it tho so I'm manhandling her into it lol. Still, hope you enjoyed the rest!
Ilay Hyams
The bit with Sara caught me off guard, it seemed to come out of nowhere. I love the advancement in his relationship tho
