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New character - Lana

🕑 Added 2024-12-28 13:00:13 +0000 UTC

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Cyber

Body and style is fine. I'd go with LESS of the MOUTH piercings, maybe switch it to a tongue one (or 1 tongue + 1 on her upper right lip) insead of 3 mouth ones? to contrast the fact that she has eyebrow piercings in her top left side?) that you can work with for animations/story later? Also a little more dark eye liner under the eyes could be a good introduction to the character, and then depending on whether you use Serene or Hecate powers, you can make the eyes brighter or darker from there. I think a little lore building tidbit you can also do is add a tattoo on the right side of her neck (the side where her shirt is more open/wide) that's covered like maybe 80% by her neck collar. That might add a bit of mystery or trivia about her backstory, why she had some sort of a tattoo (whether just lore or plot related to the "goddesses") but covers up that art instead of showcasing it... it depends on her role in the story, if she's a mystery to watch out for, or if she's more like Annie with a dark past.