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Naruto: The Outsider's Resolve: CH_73

🕑 Added 2023-01-17 18:16:01 +0000 UTC

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Coalman95

So I'm not sure if english is you first language or not but I got to say this chapter is rough. The topic and events are fine actually a enjoyable change of pace... well they would be if not for all the grammar jank and incorrect spelling/words. Its not the worst I've ever seen but compared to previous chapters it's bad. Who ever beta edited this needs to go over it again.

Sly Bayesian Fox

I'd be surprised if Takuma made it into the Anbu at all. Takuma is only better than average, and this arc (for now) feels like the calm before the storm. Though I'd love to see Takuma in the intelligence/infiltration division.

Martha p

Do you plan to join Takuma in the Anbu or fight on the front line? or make it an expert in infiltration tracking missions? infiltration?? or the intelligence division with the Naras?? ??or none previous?? I look good him in any of these ......


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