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Naruto: The Outsider's Resolve: CH_90

🕑 Added 2023-02-18 02:00:38 +0000 UTC

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SleepySnake Zzzz

I curious about whether takuma will witness his first death be it from our side or the enemies side. I think it would be a good idea to have him experience death before he kills someone. It would help him for when he does kill someone the impact won’t be as jarring and it could help him resolve himself if someone on the team dies preferably the other team they are annoying. Also I didn’t say this earlier but if he has killed animals for food such as birds, boar, deer, ect then that would mean he is not unfamiliar with taking a life this is important because if so that means he would be desensitized to death and killing to an extent this would make killing a person a lot easier to do and accept. If you don’t really understand why this is true just think of it like driving for the first time you do it with someone first someone who you are familiar with so that your not so nervous then you drive by yourself as you get used it. If you just started driving alone at the start all by yourself you would be extremely nervous and have lots of anxiety you would probably be a mess of course there are those that would be perfectly fine but you get the picture if you take things step by step doing things such as killing or driving and ect it will be alot easier to deal with at least mentally but that’s the important part your mentality that will be the biggest obstacle in doing anything. All right that’s it for my tedtalk in killing this month next month I shall give another next month Bye bye see you next month

Sly Bayesian Fox

well written. I like your description and "resolution" of the conflict. It feels natural and logical, if not nothing else.


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