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Naruto: The Outsider's Resolve: CH_033: Genin Corps

🕑 Added 2022-11-16 21:20:07 +0000 UTC

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Guese5353

I love it

Arthur Ehode

Yes ! Definitely how I envisioned it ! Keep up the good work !

Barnacleboy

This is a pretty good way to depict the genin corp. the way I see it it’s like the military that get sent to the front lines after a month of drills and training. I also see them being the ones that learn the protocols to follow in the senerio of a leaf shinobi attack. And in the future after uchiha massacre, police.

Chase Roush

Love the directions it's going 👍👍

Lazerate

Still, I believe Takuma is not that weak now. Furthermore, maybe here some "unnecessary" skills which he was taught by Maruboshi will find some use? Maybe this knowledge will help Takuma to earn some respect from the elders, being despised by his peers. But this scene with mad angry and screaming instructor is too cliche...

Lazerate

I'd expect some bullying from former classmates, but from instructor... Too army-like I think. It is strange that he even knows about Takuma's failure. And I don't believe this is so uncommon occurrence to fail some tests. So the reaction is a little bit exaggerated in my opinion

FictionOnlyReader

The name for ARC-02. The first arc was full of hardship, so I chose something opposite to the theme and named it Sakura-Colored Days of Shinobi Academy— Sakura means cherry blossom which are pink, a color that's generally seen as fluffy, soft, and loved filled— thus opposite

DaoOfAnime

Uh, if you want names… just use a random name gen?


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