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Naruto: The Outsider's Resolve: CH_256
🕑 Added 2024-06-01 20:49:19 +0000 UTCHalfway between Camp Banana and the Spring City of Yu, a temporary base with more than a couple hundred shinobi stood as the army stopped on their journey to take a rest. It had been a day since the troops at Camp Banana had left the troops at Camp Banana for their journey toward Yu. A week ago they had received information from the precursor team that had infiltrated the city for the sake of collecting information about the enemy. The quality and quantity of intelligence procured and compiled by the team was impressive, and made up for how much time they had taken to deliver.
Inside a tent built in the middle of the base, Jonin Shirakumo of the Hidden Leaf stood in front of a large circular table. A map of Yu and the surrounding area was spread out on the table.
"The walls of the city were constructed with specialised Earth nature ninjutsu, making them durable." He traced a wooden pointed on the thick dark walls highlighted on the map. "The plan was to create two opening in the wall and breach the city with a two-pronged approach.... However that seems to have changed," he said looking at the three Hidden Steam shinobi around the table.
Camp Banana troops weren't enough to take back Yu. According to the reports, there were five jonin in the city while they only had two jonin, which made them grossly outnumbered. The Hidden Steam had allotted their own shinobi to supplement their numbers, bringing them up to a matching five jonin along with an appropriate number of chunin and genin.
The Hidden Steam were heavily invested in liberating Yu because the three jonin they were sending were a lot for a smaller village like them to allot for a mission. It made sense from an economical standpoint. There were three cities including Yu that were captured by the enemy and all of those cities fell in an area that produced considerable amount of food for the country, and those captured cities allowed the enemy to have a chokehold on that region.
"Obviously not," one of the Hidden Steam jonin replied. "Those walls have protected the city for decades and it would take millions to fix them if you put two massive holes in them. We aren't going to put holes in the city walls."
"You don't have to... I'm more than happy to do it on my own," said Jonin Toridasu of the Hidden Leaf. He was the only one sitting in the room full of jonin and chunin.
Before the Hidden Steam jonin could say anything in response and then Toridasu could make it worse with a quip Shirakumo knew would come, he snapped the chain of conversation,
"We understand," he said quickly, "which is why we're going to breach the city through the front gates—which will of course destroy the gates. Jonin Toridasu will lead and create that opening."
"That much is fine," said the Hidden Steam jonin while giving a partially hidden displeased look.
"With pleasure," said Toridasu with a simple smile to the Hidden Steam jonin.
The only reason there wasn't a bigger commotion was because of Toridasu's age. He was the most senior among them all, and while age didn't connote ability and competency, an old man in shinobi's world which was a young man's game meant that he had survived more than everyone else, which was something to be respected.
Shirakumo moved the conversation along swiftly,
"We're going push forth into the city aggressively. Our main priority is to drive the enemy out. I can't stress this enough but we have to be fast and heavy-handed. There's no telling what the enemy might do when they realise that they're not going to win—they might burn the city down just so that there's nothing to recover—we want to put so much pressure that they have no time to do anything beside run away."
He continued, "Or next focus will be to occupy and save the key strategic points inside the city." There were points in the city map that were highlighted. "The major streets, the city center, the grain stockpiles, the electric plant, the water treatment system. We want to occupy all of these essentials as to ensure that after everything's over, the city is able to function normally."
They had been planning for the recapture since before they had received the information from the team inside Yu. Each chunin team was given specific assignments that had gone through modifications and improvements after receiving the information. The level of preparation done was on another level than what was done for the Gojiro goldmines.
"Please convey the information to your men. None of us here want any mistakes," said Shirakumo after a forty minute long discuss where he communicated everything with the Hidden Steam side.
When the Hidden Steam side left the tent, he dismissed the chunin, leaving only him alone with Toridasu.
"For once, can you be professional. Why did you have to rile them up?" he asked.
"You can learn a lot from how a man responds with annoyances and challenge to his authority," said Toridasu, smiling as though it was a good joke.
"So you do admit that you were being annoying?" Shirakumo wanted to sigh deeply, but he had been working with Toridasu long enough to get used to his behaviour. "You recognise the tension between our two parties, so why were you fanning the flames?"
From the day they had met, the Camp Banana's Hidden Leaf troops and the Hidden Steam had been at odds with each other; there was a muted strain between the two parties that hadn't been resolved till date. The Hidden Leaf considered the Hidden Steam shinobi to inferior because of the saying that the Great Five villages produced shinobi a level higher than the others—while the Hidden Steam side thought that the Hidden Leaf shinobi weren't as invested and serious about liberating and saving the citizens of Yu and were only doing it because they were being paid.
A few fights disguised as spars had broken out in the time they had been together and despite his best attempt, Shirakumo hadn't been able to resolve the tension. Toridasu had been of no help and while the Hidden Steam jonin helped, they didn't seem to be as supportive as he had expected them to be.
"You're give this too much importance. When the time comes, all of them will fall into line," said Toridasu as he stood up. There was a deep intelligence behind his eyes as he studied the map. "All trivial matters crumble under the face of danger. Until then, this will serve as motivation. I can't make everyone on our side care about a foreign city and its people—so it's better to attack their egos and have them work hard to show that they're the best in the world. There's not enough time to have the Hidden Steam shinobi to change their views and fix their inferiority complex—
"Don't say things like that," Shirakumo sighed.
"—so it's better to light a fire under them to prove that they're not second rate." Toridasu looked up at Shirakumo and smiled, "And once they fight together, face the a common enemy together, shed blood together—all of this animosity will be replaced a mutual respect. So let the tension brew, stir the pot I say."
Shirakumo wouldn't've motivated his troops that way. But he couldn't also stop Toridasu from doing it because he was doing nothing as opposed to pocking the snake.
"Do you think Mitarashi's team caused some real damage since they handed in the report?" asked Toridasu as he stepped around Shirakumo to the other side of the table to get a better look of the map. "Or do you think they went into hiding?"
The report was mostly intelligence about the enemy, but the pre-cursor team had briefly included information about their intelligence source and knew that the enemy forces were looking for the shinobi the team had kidnapped. And while they had made some waves in the city, the enemy forces were more or less intact.
"Given that they're under suspicion, I believe they won't have much choice to keep hidden and safe, but knowing Chunin Mitarashi, I believe she'd try something," Shirakumo garnered a guess. "If they kill their hostages and the surveillance team, they'd have done some damage. Genin Takuma himself is not under surveillance, and I believe he's capable of taking out a few genin without putting himself in danger."
"As long as they can get rid of another chunin or two, I'll say they did a great job."
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Back at Yu, Ebi had ordered everyone to adjust their plans and strategies to make up for the missing jonin. He had officially sounded an emergency and communicated to all the other jonin to prepare for an attack on the city.
All shinobi had turned active when one of their jonin was killed. They started working hard to shed the haze of drugs and alcohol, burn the weight they had put on during their leisurely time, and work themselves back into their top shape. It was too late to start, but at least they were alert now, and that was all Ebi could ask for.
"We are going to strengthen the walls on the southern side in anticipation of the attack," Ebi addressed the other jonin in the war room, "leaving the northern side minimally occupied.... My team has worked on a revised set of strategic locations and all teams are going to adjust accordingly. We are going to front load the density toward the south."
As Ebi was explaining the adjustments, one of the Hidden Cloud jonin interrupted quite rudely,
"I've been meaning to ask, but why are you in charge?"
Ebi leaned against the table with his hand and hung his head for a moment before looking at the Hidden Cloud jonin with a look of unbridled anger.
"I'm the leader because your sorry ass was having a time of your life when my men were kidnapped and killed. I'm the leader because I'm the reason why we're still exporting produce out of the city. If I wasn't doing THE job, this city would've been ruined long ago!" Ebi yelled with a vein popping on his forehead. "So shut the fuck up and do as you're told!"
"Or what? What are you going to do?" The Hidden Cloud jonin bit back, ready to start a fight, but was immediately pulled by the other Hidden Cloud jonin who noticed the expression people in the room and how the two sides (Steam and Cloud) were looking each other, ready to fight at the first sight of a spark of fire.
"We'll follow your lead. Please continue," said the other Hidden Cloud jonin, understanding the severity of the situation if a fight broke out.
Ebi glared at the Hidden Cloud side for a extended moment before taking a deep breath to calm his emotions from bursting out.
"... I want to front load the troops in the city near the southern walls because in the very likely case the enemy forces get past the walls, I want to trap between those manning the wall and the troops on the ground and stop them right there before they penetrate deep into the city."
There was a knock on the door that made everyone turn in. A sweating, nerve struck Hidden Steam genin stepped into the room under the gaze of four jonin and stood there in an uncomfortable rigid attention.
"What is it?" asked Ebi.
He knew the genin and knew he wouldn't disturb an important meeting without reason.
"S-Sir, we received a report from our advanced scouts." The genin gulped, "There's an... an army advancing in our direction."
While Ebi was taken aback, the other jonin looked reassured as they now knew they wouldn't be taken by surprise and could start preparing for a defence. However, Ebi who was deeply involved knew something was wrong. Just two days ago, Kon had told him that he probably had a week until the city was attacked—which was already too limited.
But... Ebi had read previous reports from the advanced scouts so he knew their rough positions.
"How long.... How long until they're here?" he asked.
The genin bowed his head as though what he was about to say was his fault,
"A little under a day, sir."
The reassurance the jonin had felt immediately shattered as they realised that they had no time before they were going to defend against an attack.
Less than a day remained until the main forces arrived at Yu.
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A/N: You guys nearly Ratio'd the last chapter.
I have read everything, and while I don't like to comment about things—I'll say that Takuma did not have the authority to kill all those civilians. None of the people in the team, even Anko, had that authority. Anko wasn't angry because of the blowback she might face— though it's a factor— she was angry because outsiders like them (anyone other than Hidden Steam or someone with authority from Land of Hot Waters) didn't have the authority to make the decision to kill those civilians even if it meant taking out a jonin.
Killing Gyon too wasn't allowed as he was a civilian despite him proficient with chakra—but given the circumstances and his role in actively sabotaging the team's mission—no one would've batted an eye, and it would've been easily justified.
But what Takuma did would've been a HUGE problem if the shinobi deaths didn't happen.
Comments
Nate Drees
I think most if not all of takumas actions in this story CAN be justified through a kind of utilitarian lens. Selling drugs? He can only help people if he’s powerful and gaining power needs money. Same for ring fights. Fighting against the assassins? It’s to prevent them from killing others. Same for the bombing that killed the jonin in the last chapter. Less overall harm caused by killing the civilians than letting the jonin and his subordinates live. There may be some inexcusable action he’s taken but I certainly can’t recall it.
Bookworm bibliophile
He was taking the moral high ground when he is with them in the mud. The greatest sin in my believe is murder. It is worse the stealing, raping and enslaving and Mc committed that in large scale.
Bookworm bibliophile
yeah he has no right to pass judgment on them. I disliked when he torturerd the ninjas who killed the civilians because it was mostly fouled by anger and extracting information as the excuse. The situation in her was similar the excuse was to kill high ranking Shinobi but it was fouled by anger and resentment. He is priding himself to be logical but he is very emotional and that tend to be the case in a lot of main characters. Except in this one the author addressed it.
David
He has earth affinity. His water jutsu would make you think it's water, but he did a chakra paper test and it was earth.
Lazerate
Huh, it seems like I misunderstood a bit, thinking that she was angry about moral side of the problem. After this comment I've reread that part and now clearly see that it was not about moral...
Joan Casado
On the level, I agree with where Anko’s fear is coming from but frankly, you said it yourself, it would have been a problem if Takuma had failed. He didn’t, and even if he was to be “punished” for overreaching his authority, the Hidden Leaf would give lip service at best to appease the rival nation. More fucked up things have been covered up for competent soldiers in history. A Genin successfully killing a group of other Genin, Chunin, and a fucking Jonin? Takuma won’t be made Chunin because Anbu is going to bum rush him with recruitment.
Mohammed Sheekh
what's takuma affinity by the way, is it water?
Joan Casado
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