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Naruto: The Outsider's Resolve: CH_263

🕑 Added 2024-06-22 18:02:56 +0000 UTC

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FictionOnlyReader

It wasn't a spur-of-the-moment decision. I knew this was going to happen before I started writing the fight, so her leaving and then coming back wasn't put in because I thought about killing Rikku in the moment. However, I'll say that I agree with your point about meaningful death. I still think her death was meaningful, but I do think it would've been better if she had been able to injure an agent in someway.

Smiling Reader

Did you really bring Rikku back just to kill her? You couldn't have her die taking out the extra root ninja? You know, make it even a little bit meaningful. I already know this is gonna be a point of trauma in the future for Takuma and it really didn't need to be.

Bookworm bibliophile

It seems mc was part of root. I can't imagine it would make him much stronger than he is now (like he is soloed couple root agent and won)but perhaps it would add some depth to his skills that are not just 2 or 3 years old( like in wrestling there is difference between beginning at the age of 5 or at 10) and it would also increase his skills.

RiverusRomurus

Takuma has used most of his trump cards and is on his last leg here, the only effective things I can see here are the clone bomb from early on, a new or interesting application of genjutsu (what im hoping for), or the timely intervention of root. Of course there's always the possibility of stuff from takumas time at root (can't tell atm if he was a recruit or expirement) or higher development of Takuma's Chakra enhancement but those feel a bit shallow atm.

Kelevra

Awesome chapter, quite a surprise at the end, I quite like this point of the story where we start seeing Takuma isn’t actually weak or slow progressing in any way but actually quite above average, for me it was one of the more difficult things in the beginning to get over but really glad I held through

Just Kab

It's expected, or at the very least, makes sense when you consider the nature of the story so far. Takumas basically been training Day-In Day-Out in far worse conditions than the others, not letting up at all. I wouldn't say it's a matter of them being weak, they're *genin*, if anything they are STRONG for Genin. Takumas just reached a level comparable to Chuunin, meanwhile they're good Genin, fighting against Good Chuunin level agents.

GN

Everything about the chapter(s)was good but I’m surprised at how weak the rest of the team(Rikki, Kameko) are in this scenario.

SunGear

No! Not best girl Rikki 😭

Astral Aion

Yeah figured at least 1 of the team had to die during this whole thing

Dillon Zepeda

Damn

Navdeep Sugandhi

Poor rikku


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