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Naruto: The Outsider's Resolve: CH_282
🕑 Added 2024-08-05 09:15:18 +0000 UTCAt a dirt field a half house after the sunrise, Maruboshi stretched his body. He was as far removed from his prime as one could be and required ample warmup to get his body to react to his commands with combat sharpness.
He looked across from him at Takuma, stretching absentmindedly. The last time they sparred was before Takuma's deployment, and his growth had plateaued because of his busy schedule in the Police Force. Now that he had gone through a war, Maruboshi wondered how much he had changed. There was a lot of free time at the camp, and if he knew his student, he wouldn't have let it go to waste.
"I see you brought weighted gear," said Maruboshi. A complete set of weighted gear sat under a tree at the edge of the field. They used to be popular a few decades ago but had fallen out of favour among shinobi. He liked them because they made for simple yet effective all-day training gear.
"I have an imbalance between my physical and spiritual energies. I wore a set for a few months to grow my physical energies. I didn't take them to Yu, so I've fallen out of the habit, but they helped. I'm getting back into it, and this set is much heavier than the one I used at the camp," said Takuma as he stretched down to grab his ankles.
"The quality of chakra, of course. I had entirely forgotten about it," Maruboshi said, impressed that Takuma was mindful of such a concept. Chakra was a mixture of two energies, and an imbalance between them affected the quality of the chakra.
"It can't be helped; you are far too old to be concerned with the imbalance."
A person's physical energy reserves naturally decline as part of the ageing process, thus creating an imbalance between the two energies. It became a severe problem for shinobi in their forties; they could theoretically keep the two energies balanced by rigorous and regular physical training if they hadn't already hit their genetic limit for maximum physical energy, but it was all but impossible to stop an imbalance in the fifties and only got worse with time.
"That is true," Maruboshi sighed. He hadn't been concerned with chakra quality for a long time; he had genuinely forgotten about it until Takuma brought it up. "Nevertheless, I'm impressed that you're trying to achieve balance, Takuma. Not many people try to improve the quality of their chakras."
Just like Takuma had plateaued during his Police Force days, most people didn't have the time (or didn't want to spend time) to correct their energy balance, and, more often than not, they considered working on their jutsu to be a more worthy use of their time. However, ignoring the imbalance usually created a rift that couldn't be bridged.
"Don't put it on now. I want to see what you can do without the weights," Maruboshi said to Takuma as he walked to the weighted gear.
"What are the restrictions?" asked Takuma as he left the weighted gear behind.
"None. Use everything you can to come at me."
"Very well," Takuma said, immediately dashing toward him, attempting to catch him off guard.
Maruboshi smiled as he crossed his arms to form a guard as Takuma laid out a haymaker to start them off. A vigorous force assaulted his arms, and he felt the breaching chakra reach his bones; Takuma's chakra augmentation had gotten significantly more potent.
"Your control has improved," Maruboshi commented as he stepped away and pulled his torso back to avoid a swing kick aimed at his head. Before he left, Takuma was experimenting with spreading the expunged chakra over a larger area to create a lighter but jarring effect or going the opposite direction and concentrating the chakra into a smaller spot to focus all the damage into a small area.
Takuma equipped a kunai. Maruboshi mimicked him and pulled one of his own. The two of them leaned into the knife fight, their blades moving at a blurring speed, cutting through the air and sparking clashes. Takuma was in constant motion, assaulting Maruboshi everywhere, from his head to his legs and coming at him from left and right. Maruboshi, partially owing to his prosthetic leg, didn't move around as much compared to Takuma but was still deceptively agile and fast for his age. His footwork was simpler, but he deftly met all the strikes effortlessly and used his experience to forecast Takuma's moves.
He's gotten more aggressive yet again, Maruboshi observed as he quickly slapped away another Takuma's augmented punch. Takuma had always been aggressive; his fighting style felt like he wanted to overwhelm and get it done quickly—but now it felt like he was just being... reckless. It wasn't a direction of growth Maruboshi felt excited about.
He decided to prod Takuma to see how he would react. He left an opening for him to target, and as expected, Takuma immediately attacked it. However, simultaneously, Maruboshi struck out with a palm strike. He caught him clocking the palm and thought he would respond by switching to defence, but instead, he moved his body to minimise the damage and committed to exploiting the opening.
The two of them hit each other within a split second of each other and were thrown back. Maruboshi felt the chakra slam into his body, jarring him as the force spread through his body. He locked in on Takuma, thinking he would rush in, but he was forming hand seals as he stabilised from the palm strike he had eaten.
Within seconds, a thickening mist descended over the field. It was the Water Release: Hidden Mist Jutsu. Maruboshi chased after Takuma while he could still see him, but he shuddered using the Body Flicker Jutsu. The mist settled in, and he lost sight of Takuma.
He's trying to win, thought Maruboshi. In their various spars over the years, Takuma had only used the Hidden Mist Jutsu a couple of times because their spars were an opportunity for Takuma to try things out and get advice from Maruboshi. As the mist obscured everything, he couldn't give pointers about things he couldn't see. He realised that he had asked Takuma to show what he could do, which was his way of showing his capabilities.
A sound of rushing water closed in on him, and Maruboshi tried to roll away but was hit in the back by Takuma's Water Release: Wild Water Wave. The jutsu was much stronger than before. He felt an ache spread through his lower back and wanted to jump away to gather himself when he remembered Takuma's combat habits. He could still see the floor, and just as he thought, the water on the ground flew up to supply water for the Water Release: Eight Tentacles.
The ground cracked as he shot toward the floating water and found Takuma, who was startled, shown by the floating water trembling in the air. Maruboshi kicked him in the chest, sending him flying through the air and shattering his control over the water that splashed on the ground.
Habits were natural; they were inevitable. The challenge was to ensure people didn't recognise a pattern in habits because that was what tells were, and they could ruin a fighter.
Maruboshi charged through the mist in the direction Takuma flew in. He looked around, but Takuma was missing. There was no use trying to use his vision in the fog, and he hadn't trained his ears like Takuma, but he had other ways to make his way through the mist.
He waved hand seals for the Earth Release: Earth Tremor Sense Jutsu and pressed his hands on the ground for a wave of Earth nature chakra to pulse through the ground. He shared the jutsu with Takuma, which used seismic vibrations to locate any creature in contact with the ground. The vibrations returned to him, and he knew Takuma's position.
"Smart move," he muttered with a smile.
Maruboshi turned back to where Takuma had lost control of the water after getting kicked. Takuma was right there, undoubtedly forming the water tentacles. Maruboshi didn't rush and walked back to the spot with kunai in both hands.
"Hmm?"
The sound of crackling made him halt. He recognised it as possibly coming from a Lightning ninjutsu, but Takuma had a poor aptitude for nature. Before he could finish the thought, a bluish light poked through the mist's cover, and Takuma appeared flying in with eight lightning-charged tentacles flared behind his back.
Maruboshi capped his physical abilities when he sparred with Takuma to make the fight fair, but at that moment, he moved as fast as he could to evade four electrified coming for him. Takuma didn't let the pressure and threw the kunai at such a frightening speed that he was taken aback and again dodged at a higher speed.
The moment Takuma's feet touched the ground, he pushed even more, with all eight tentacles acting like hungry beasts hunting their meals. Maruboshi weaved among the barrage of tentacles that looked more menacing than ever. His student had formed a combination ninjutsu, a feat that most failed to achieve because of various complex factors—and that's why he knew that getting touched by the tentacles wasn't going to be a pleasant experience.
Maruboshi slowed his agility to what he considered fair sparring standards, and for the first time in their years of sparring, he reached for his back and pulled out his sword. Opposite him, the electrified tentacles cast a light on Takuma's face, and his eyes widened in surprise.
A single pulse of chakra coated the sword as Maruboshi clasped the sword's worn-down yet comfortable grip. His aged eyes took a picture of the tentacles before him; he calculated a selection of sword swings and unleashed them just as he imagined. The sword moved so fast that all eight tentacles split so close to each other in time that it looked like they were cut at the exact same moment. The lightning inside the water clung to the sword's metal, and Maruboshi expunged it off the blade with another pulse of chakra.
Takuma dug his soles into the ground and backed off as the tentacles lost water mass and the lightning within them rapidly faded. But it was Maruboshi's turn to go on offence.
"You have undoubtedly improved," he smiled.
He closed the distance in one quick fore-step, giving Takuma no time to convert his eight short tentacles to four full-length ones. Maruboshi tried to cut them off, but Takuma pulled them back, opening himself for an attack, which Maruboshi took, but as he swung the blade's dull side for the shoulder, Takuma swung his fist.
Maruboshi was confused because Takuma's arm wasn't going to reach, but then an invisible(transparent) force rippled out from his fist and struck Maruboshi right in the face. It didn't injure him, but he was left dazed. If it was someone at Takuma's level, getting out with a broken nose would've been lucky.
At that same moment, the four tentacles wrapped around Maruboshi's limbs, trying to pull him off balance, but before they could tighten their grasp, Maruboshi pulled back at the last moment.
There was a second lull during which the two observed each other. Both had used something they hadn't shown the other before.
A new form of augmentation? Maruboshi thought, gaining a new level of appreciation for how Takuma had incorporated his self-made chakra augmentation into combat style. It had gone from something he could barely use to now using variations.
Maruboshi readied his sword as Takuma moved first, and when he took his first step, Maruboshi's vision turned hazy and blurry, with colours mixing into each, rendering him unable to see anything. He saw the black blurb that could only be Takuma's clothes dissipate into the surroundings and immediately jumped back. The ground began to merge into everything else, and he feared his footing, scared that he would trip. He had his prosthetic leg almost as long as he had a real one and had made it part of his body, but suddenly, after decades of not thinking about it, he felt how much he missed his real leg.
He was going to fall. His life as a shinobi had all but ended when he lost his leg, but he had somehow managed to keep it alive. However, he realised that he was a fool to believe he had recovered himself, and when it mattered the most, his body would fail him.
A wave of chakra pumped through Maruboshi's body and shattered the genjutsu with Takuma's fist inches before his chest. He caught the fist before it could hit his chest and absorbed tremendous force with his hand. He grabbed the hand and spun Takuma upside down using it before slamming him onto the ground with enough force to dent and split the dirt underneath.
"...That was exemplary, Takuma," Maruboshi sighed as he put his sword on Takuma's neck. His other hand stroked his prosthetic leg. "However, I must say that genjutsu was unpleasant, to say the least... and thus quite effective."
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Author's Notes
1. Takuma's growing. The genjutsu is called Genjutsu: Haze. It's a touch-based genjutsu, and Takuma used his tentacles to apply chakra like he did during the Kon chase scene in Yu. The fear in Maruboshi was indirectly caused by the genjutsu—it enhanced his fears— and was not specifically Takuma's intent. This aspect can be targeted, harnessed, and weaponised. I think I'm going to make "fear" a big part of Takuma's genjutsu.
2. I wanted to write something about the ANBU test post here in the notes here. But I'm going to do it in the next chapter because I'm hella sleepy. I have read all the comments, but only replied to a couple because I haven't formed many concrete thoughts yet. I know the vibe I want to convey, but the execution part of it is still in works.
Comments
Astral Aion
I always thought that takuma’s go to genjutsu type would be one that was so pleasant the opponent wouldn’t want to break the genjutsu like how he answered mikoto’s question about what he thought the most powerful genjutsu was when he first started learning under her though I do like the fear idea too
TimGuyy
Yessss! It's great to see this level of combat progress against Maruboshi! Takuma must definitely be on par or greater than both Uchiha Izumi and Momoe in combat fundamentals (Benefits of The Ring and War), if only behind them in jutsu access. I would love it if you could include Momoe and Izumi, or just one of them, in the Anbu so we can get more from those characters. At least Momoe, because she is your own character and has a potentially interesting direction for development.
Ayush Garg
Tftc.
Bookworm bibliophile
Couldn't Maruboshi teach mc his ninjutsu ?
Mohammed Sheekh
takuma is at a level he can take on low level chunin by himself, anko is a high level chunin and would dismantle takuma though so he has much progress to achieve
Kirill Yrchenko
Thanks for the chapter
SunGear
Damn happy to see the growth of are mc.
Kameron Dias
Gracias por el capítulo 👍
