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Naruto: The Outsider's Resolve: CH_290
🕑 Added 2024-08-29 16:45:13 +0000 UTCBeautiful.
That was what Maruboshi thought when he saw his student getting beat up. The skill shown by Uchiha Mikoto was exquisite; every move looked elegant and effortless, but all of it was planned down to the very minute details. He expected it from a jonin, especially a Uchiha, to possess such skill, but that didn't take away from the fact that it was a delight to watch.
However, Mikoto wasn't the only one who deserved praise. Maruboshi had fought Takuma regularly over the years and was well aware of it, so he was proud to see him step out of his comfort zone and try different tactics. His choices were generally terrible. They opened him up to attacks, turned his fighting style into a disjointed mess, actively made him worse, and even frustrated him enough that he switched back at the end—and yet trying out all those changes was the right choice.
Maruboshi could almost see a glimpse into the future, where Takuma's combat style had evolved. Currently, he was in messy flux, but once the pieces fell into place, he would have something strong, stable, and sustainable that he could rely upon out in the field.
As he watched the fight, he felt two gazes from separate directions. He pulled his eyes off the fight to look at the peeping on them but couldn't find anyone in the trees; they had hidden themselves well. He didn't find it strange because the field was public property; neither was it isolated—and the Hidden Leaf was a village filled to the brim with shinobi who had the learned tendency to hide themselves for no apparent reason.
The gazes disappeared the moment he swept his gaze across the field. But he did wonder if the hidden onlookers were ANBU operators observing Takuma before his test. He had no way to confirm other than catching them, which would be embarrassing and rude if he was wrong and would do nothing if they were indeed ANBU.
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Uchiha Fugaku swiftly hid himself better when he saw Maruboshi Kosuke look right in his direction. The "Eternal Genin" was already a senior citizen, but it seemed like he still had the senses of a prime hunter. It had been such a long time since Fugaku had seen his wife fight that he didn't want to miss it and thus came to observe the spar—but he didn't want to interrupt or intrude, so he watched from the shadows.
The spar was more or less what he expected. Mikoto offence was solely run through counterattacks, which made sense because when it came to the Uchiha Interceptor Fist—not only was she better at it than him and arguably the best in the clan, but taijutsu was a bigger part of her combat style than him.
The Uchiha Interceptor Fist was the taijutsu developed and used by the Uchiha clan. The core of the taijutsu was the interception of the opponent, making corresponding responses or counterattacks that struck at incoming attacks. The style was also heavily based on not letting the opponent get into a flow by disrupting their moves and intensively punishing the opponent's openings and bad habits.
To be effective, the user had to be proficient at reading the opponent, which made it perfect for the Uchiha clan because of their dojutsu, the Sharingan, which had the power of insight to mimic and understand other's moves.
And even though Takuma wasn't even close to being a challenge, he could tell that Mikoto was feeling comfortable. She had effortlessly used the clan's ninjutsu to perfectly dismantle her opponent without breaking a sweat while restricting herself to his level.
Retirement had undoubtedly had its effects, but it felt like she had retained most of her skill—her experience as a jonin was still there, buried under the surface— and she would only need to bring her body up to speed to once again hone her combat instinct to reattain a level reasonably close to before she had retired.
As Mikoto finished the fight by knockout, Fugaku turned around to leave. Seeing her fight made him consider inviting her to regular spars just between them so they could spend time together and perhaps return to the time before they had their children.
He turned back with the three tomoe spinning in his red pupils as he locked in on the person hidden in the trees. The person was well hidden, with only small parts of their body visible, which wouldn't have been a problem if not for the Sharingan that saw chakra in colour that outed the person. Fugaku blinked, the traces of chakra disappeared, and he could no longer spot the person.
Chakra masking, he guessed—the person was a professional.
Fugaku glanced at Mikoto and company once before leaving.
Whoever it was, with his wife and Maruobshi Kosuke present, there wasn't much they could do.
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"What do you think?" Maruboshi asked Mikoto after she knocked Takuma out.
"I give him a point for efforts," said Mikoto as she dusted the dirt and grass off her outfit before kneeling down to straighten Takuma so he wasn't lying in an off-position. "I could tell he was trying things, but they made him disjointed at best."
"It'll take some time to integrate new things smoothly."
"If he's trying to avoid trading damage, then genjutsu will work wonders."
"How is he at genjutsu?" he asked.
"He has the fundamentals down, but if he really wants to take full advantage of genjutsu, he needs to open his mind to the possibilities," said Mikoto as she stared down at Takuma. "Most shinobi mistake ninjutsu and genjutsu to be similar when they're not. Unlike ninjutsu, technical skill is only part of the puzzle; application is the half where the true potential lies. The mind is a complex system, both a hindrance and an advantage for genjutsu users. It takes a lot to create believable illusions, but the limit to what the mind will accept is near limitless. He needs to realise that genjutsu is more than a string of hand seals that perform a certain function—the day that understanding clicks in his mind will be the day he'll start using genjutsu in his special way."
It was good that Takuma had Mikoto as his genjutsu teacher because Maruboshi didn't have the talent for using genjutsu—as Mikoto said, it took a lot to deceive the mind—and he didn't have it in him to create believable illusions beyond the most basic genjutsu.
He recalled the genjutsu Takuma had used on him in their spar earlier that week. It was much more potent than expected and had tightly gripped his mind. There was no doubt that Takuma had the ability to create very believable genjutsu.
"I will work with him on genjutsu application when we resume our lessons," she said.
Takuma noisily heaved as he abruptly sat up with his eyes wide open. His body tensed, and he looked ready to jump at the sight of danger as he scanned his surroundings before calming down when he saw both his teachers standing around him.
"That was a shit show," Takuma groaned.
"You did great," said Mikoto, tossing him a water bottle.
"I didn't manage to hit you once."
"That wasn't going to happen either way. As long as I didn't want you to hit me, you wouldn't have touched the clothes on my back."
Takuma looked at Maruboshi, who shrugged. If he didn't want Takuma to hit him, he could guarantee that didn't happen. But that was never the purpose of their spars.
"How did you do that?" Takuma asked Mikoto, staring into her eyes. "Are you wearing coloured contacts?"
Mikoto tried to stop herself, but she burst into laughter, which turned Takuma red with embarrassment.
"You don't need the Sharingan to do what I did today, Takuma," Mikoto chuckled as she wiped a tear from her eyes. "With enough combat experience, the willingness to improve your taijutsu, and the right approach to learning, you too could predict your enemy's moves one day... But you're not wrong; my eyes played a major role in how I fought today."
"How so?" asked Takuma.
"Your water tentacle jutsu. I have fought someone who used it, so I knew that you could change the tentacle's length, and thus, I was ready for you to use that tactic," said Mikoto.
Takuma stared at her for a moment before looking down at the ground. Mikoto wanted to continue, but she saw a signal from Maruboshi to wait. After a few seconds of silence, Takuma spoke up again,
"...You have the Sharingan that allowed you to copy your opponent's moves. That must mean you have tons of fights from many types of fighters recorded in your mind. I must have fought like one of those fighters—or a combination of certain aspects from various fighters—so even though you didn't use your eyes against me, you had the knowledge to predict my moves."
"Correct," Mikoto smiled.
Takuma sighed. "The Sharingan sure is impressive."
"It is impressive," said Mikoto with a hint of pride, "but it's not that simple. Our eyes give us the gift of insight, allowing us to parse visual information at a high rate, which is how we can copy whatever we see—and as it may sound, many of my clan folk who have unlocked the eye never go beyond simple monkey copy when there's so much more to it..."
Maruboshi gazed at the woman before him and was surprised to see her talking negatively about her clan members in front of outsiders. It was natural to have such thoughts, but from what he knew, clan shinobi didn't reveal those thoughts to outsiders as they were representative of their clan. The matter of reputation was taken very seriously. Moreover, the person doing it was the Lady Uchiha, who was always expected to defend her clan.
He glanced at Takuma; the relationship between Mikoto and his student seemed closer than he thought.
"...When I was still active, I used to look back to my fights, and rather than just monkey copy, I used to take my time to understand why my opponent moved the way they did it. I was often wrong in my understanding because the Sharingan doesn't give answers, but by investing time and effort, I was rewarded with knowledge about combat beyond even my clan folk, who had been shinobi far longer than me... I was so thrilled by what I had found that I fought every clan member willing to fight me. I made them imitate every opponent they had fought so I could copy them and then take my time to understand and break down their opponents until I had the correct answers to problems I might face in the future."
Maruboshi felt a chill go down his spine as he looked at Mikoto. There was a terrifying intelligence in her eyes that made his instinct scream danger. The Uchiha were infamous for their Sharingan—but when people talked about them, it was only about copying ninjutsu hand seals and taijutsu movements to mimic their opponents. He had been alive long to know that the Sharingan was capable of more than copying, but what he just heard was frightening, to say the least.
Mikoto, by herself, would have faced a decent set of enemies she would've copied from. But she had just claimed that she made her clan member imitate their opponents. If he were conservative and guessed ten unique opponents per clan member and fought ten members, she would have copied an additional hundred opponents.
Even if there were significant overlaps, she would still have gained rich experience beyond what most shinobi would ever have experienced.
He knew she was a jonin, but he now felt a monster was standing before him. And she had claimed that all Sharingan-bearing Uchiha could do the same—they didn't do it, but they all had the potential. He was again reminded why the Uchiha clan was one of the founder clans with a deep and dominant history in the Warring States Periods.
It also made him think that Takuma would benefit more if he learned taijutsu instead of genjutsu from her.
"But knowing the answers isn't enough; you need to be able to use them quickly and correctly. The Uchiha Interceptor Fist is based on the tenets that focus on reading the opponent, finding their weakness, targeting their openings, and disrupting their flow... I applied my knowledge through my taijutsu and became proficient to the point where I no longer needed my eyes to see through my opponents—the eyes elevated everything I did—but even without them, I felt as though scales had fallen from my eyes. I had unlocked a new state of being... I was free, and I was in control."
Takuma looked gripped and utterly immersed. He hung on her every word as though it was a mantra for eternal prosperity. Mikoto's words were resonating with him.
"You don't need my eyes, Takuma," Mikoto asserted confidently. "Yes, they helped tremendously, but I—not my eyes—am the reason behind my understanding and skill. If you look at your opponent and apply your mind to it, you will see things that most people miss—and that's where you will find what separates ordinary from extraordinary.
"It will take a lot, and it will not be easy, but I think you can do it... because you were doing it today, weren't you?"
"...Yes," said Takuma.
Maruboshi looked at him, and he seemed lost in his thoughts.
It was the right decision to bring in Mikoto for the spar.
Maruboshi could tell that something was about to change. He could tell that something in Takuma's mind had opened. He felt that Takuma was going to go through a change much bigger than fixing his trading damage problem.
He wondered what Takuma would be like after those changes.
Comments
Lestrat Shadow
Thanks for the chapter....I think anbu is the way...with mikoto be more of teacher relationship that string to clan ( i mean it will not complicate it interaction with mikoto - to choise clan or her ).
Star445
Takuma needs to take genjutsu inspirations from his previous life. Like use JJK domain expansions such as Gojo’s Domain Expansion to overwhelm an opponent’s mind.
BlackPanda
This Mikoto is so good and smart , but then I realize someone wrote her this good and smart, damn this author is so good and smart
Marcin
Sharingan in the end is an ability to see chakra... wouldnt it be possible to show one thing hiding another under ? We already know that Mist jutsu blocks sharingan real good... just need to implemnet it into personal cloak... maybe twist the chakra so when sharingan is used it will create feedback in eyes :D Also nickname idea "Oculi mortui" Btw... a thought occurs. He uses a lot of Outsider slang... his friends listen to it a lot. Wouldnt it bring attention to him ? Like - TANK TEAM... how would they know ? There are no tanks in narutoverse... and before WW1 implementation noone ever would connect ther word Tank with something to block dmg. Or- no plan survives the contact with enemy.
The Duke of Nova Scotia
Dead Eyed Reaper?
Astral Aion
Takuma is going to be the copy ninja kakashi of taijutsu. Didn’t expect fugaku to show up was nice to get his perspective a little. Want to see how takuma’s genjutsu comes along in the future so bad though kinda sad mikoto didn’t use genjutsu in the spar really thought she would.
Penguin Glutton
Tftc a monster is born mm
Jair Marinho Cardoso da Silva Júnior
I am curious how he would react to the Tsukiyomi, but i believe he is not strong enought currently. Actually, even the kotoamatsukami would be interesting. How his imunity would react to something so diferent from normal. I aways believe that naruto did genjustsu really dirty overall, and the only true exceptions being Sharingan related, when it should be only limited by imagination.
FictionOnlyReader
Oh they most definitely would've already done that testing. I wrote in one of the chapters that they weren't able to find what gives Takuma his immunity—but I feel like they would've tested his limit. I will bring it up when the story allows me to. Here's what I think. It takes some time for his immunity to trigger— - When he fought the Yuhi clan member, it took some time because he didn't have any genjutsu experience - When he started training with Mikoto, she used genjutsu on him and he got out of it but not immediately. Takuma's immunity will kick in regardless of how strong the genjutsu is—but the stronger the genjutsu, the more time it will take for it to pull him out. BUT, as Takuma grows stronger, his immunity grows stronger—as in, his own genjutsu experience boosts his immunity, triggering it faster.
Jair Marinho Cardoso da Silva Júnior
So, just a sugestion, but have you given though for Takuma to ask help testing his genjutsu immunity?(Sorry, this was the closest word i could think to describe it) Like asking Mikoto to use some of her genjutsu on him, or others? It seems to me like a waste to have that but not knowing the limits
itsNipply
I like this Uchiha Mikoto. She’s mommy who will manhandle and kick your ass across the field but then kiss your boo boo better. Who cares about ANBU. I want more Mikoto! Let her keep kicking Takuma’s ass! LOL
FictionOnlyReader
"Dead Eyed Death" added to notes for possible future nickname/title.
FictionOnlyReader
Bro called out my entire writing style
The Duke of Nova Scotia
Oh, our boy is going to be a force to be reckoned with, for sure. He will be a jonin of serious repute in time, me thinks. "Dead Eyed Death" has a nice ring.
FictionOnlyReader
Sharingan has more capabilities. The copy stuff was the only thing relevant for this converstion. Also, I don't like the microscopic thing that we saw in Sasuke vs Deidara. Sasuke saw through his skin, into his body—that's x-ray—that intruders upon Byakugan power, and it was so abruptly introduced that I don't like it. I feel like it could've easily been explained through the Sharingan's chakra vision. Sasuke could've seen foreign chakra inside his body, standing out from his chakra, and could've deduced that it was Deidara (not even deduce, he woud know it was Deidara's because they had been fighting there for a while)—and taken care of it the same way he did in the fight without introducing a new ability. I think the reason it was shown like that because Kishimoto wanted to show the nono-explosive creations and made up the ability for just that scene—we never saw that ability ever again.
FictionOnlyReader
Thank you, fixed the repitition.
Lazybeep
Tftc
Mohammed Sheekh
sharingan also allows the person to see microscopic organisms
james adams
He turned back with the three tomoe spinning in his red pupils as he locked in on the person hidden in the trees. They were well hidden, but small parts of their body were visible, which wouldn't be a problem but the Sharingan could see chakra in different colours and those visible body parts were differently coloured in his The person was well hidden, with only small parts of their body visible, which wouldn't have been a problem if not for the Sharingan that saw chakra in colour that outed the person. Fugaku blinked, the traces of chakra disappeared, and he could no longer spot the person.
james adams
Thanks for the chapter Also you duplicated a paragraph in daddy uchihas pov
Joan Casado
Average fiction writer: The Sharingan is bullshit FictionOnly: The Sharingan is a very intricate, very valuable tool that will only go as far as the wielder lets it…and also bullshit.
