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Naruto: The Outsider's Resolve: Post-ARC-03 Expectations
🕑 Added 2023-03-06 18:39:57 +0000 UTCWelcome to the Post-ARC-03 expectations post!
This post, like the last two posts, will be asking questions about what we want to see in the story moving on. I’ll be taking your replies to this post as a suggestion and making the story better.
Alright, enough of the chit-chat, and let’s get moving.
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Point No. 1: Uchiha Is A Shinobi Clan
There are many portrayals of the Uchiha throughout fanon. Some of them portray Uchiha as arrogant bigots consumed by their power. Others show Uchiha as a clan of people who can do no harm, misunderstood and wronged by everyone else.
I’m a fan of a middle ground. If we are to make a version of Uchiha that suits this story, we will have to look at shinobi clans first.
What are some features of shinobi clans that are common across all clans, be it Danzo’s Shimura, Hiruzen’s Sarutobi, Hiashi’s Hyuuga, or Fugaku’s Uchiha— what are those features that should be applied to all clans?
Once we decide that, we can determine what additions we can add upon that are unique to Uchiha based on the clan’s culture (their bloodline and history.) We can even modify some common clan features to suit the Uchiha better.
So, for this point, you guys can focus on the following:
1) Common clan features
2) Uchiha add-ons based on their history
3) Anything else you might want to point out
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Point No. 2: The State of Leaf Military Police Force
How Uchiha run their clan is one thing. But running a Police Force should be a different matter because the Police Force is not only the Uchiha but also their ally clans like the Fuma clan.
Now, the question here is what should be the Police Force’s structure and operational methods? Do they work like a US police precinct? Uniformed Cops—> Detectives—> Sergeant—> Lieutenant—> Captain—> Chief. Or should it be something else? I have my own thoughts about how I want to show it, but I don’t want to influence your thoughts with mine.
Does the Police Force have departments that deal with different crimes? Or does everyone do a little of everything?
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Point No. 3: What Do They Do?
This could’ve been merged with the last point, but I decided to make it a separate point.
Takuma’s first C-rank mission featured the Police Force, and in that mission, we saw that the Police Force dealt with civilian matters. This means that Leaf Military Police Force is the only policing authority because we know they have power over shinobi.
The question for this point is what kind of missions are you guys are hoping to see— and equally importantly how much do you guys want to see Takuma playing a policeman?
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Point No. 4: B-Plots
The entirety of this post had been about the Uchiha and Police Force. And while ARC-04 is going to be set in the Police Force, I don't want it to be all that is shown.
B-Plots are storylines that are shown apart from the main plot which for the purpose of this ARC-04 is going to be Takuma's life in the Police Force. I have 1 B-Plot storyline figured out which I want to cover.
What are your expectations for the other storylines?
This is too broad of a question, and I'm not expecting an answer to this question because figuring B-plots are an author's basic responsibility.
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Point No. 5: Anything Else?
What else do you wish to see in the novel? Go ahead, tell me.
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-> You DO NOT have to fit all your points in one comment. Thought of something on the spot, make another comment. I don't care if you end up making ten different comment as long as they address something meaningful.
-> I will reply here on Patreon comments, but if you want to have more of an active back-and-forth with me, Discord is the place to do that. For that, you will have to connect your Discord to your Patreon. Only by doing that, will you gain access to Patreon-Exclusive Discord Chats — which will be the only place I will discuss the points in this post as we don't want spoilers for others.
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Waiting for your response,
FictionOnlyReader
[March 07, 2022]
Comments
che whatif
can be a jounin sensei to like on of the rookie nine line replace kournai, since they both have genjustu speciallist
Also I thought about it and I think it would be stupid for Takuma to leave the Ring in the next arc : he has still much to learn/gain from it, and leaving as he is would feel as if he abandonned an opportunity. I think the right time to leave the Ring would be when he has nothing else to learn from it (maybe when he becomes Chunin, or is Chunin level wise). The last arc in the land of frost is also a good incentive for him to start taking fights with multiple opponents in the ring. It will be hard but I think it'll make him truly stand apart from other Genins.
Technobread
Adding part of takuma past would help, of what type of person before being isekai. Like what his job or his major was in school. What was his hobbies from before or his past parents jobs. Also his current body past from people who knew him back in the orphanage or the academy interacting with him now, noticing his changes.
