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Naruto: The Outsider's Resolve: CH_102

🕑 Added 2023-03-11 20:34:10 +0000 UTC

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Technobread

shisui action seemed unnecessary to use susanoo on Itachi and speech about replacing him, felt to me as if there not actually friends but subordinate and superior.

Coalman95

The scene it self isn't bad just the use of a jutsu that uses a massive amount of charka causes irrepairable eye damage and terrible pain wasn't the correct response in my opinion. Especially when blitzing Itachi and slaming him through the mirror and holding a kunai to his throat would have been more in character for some like Shisui of the Body Flicker. His speech also felt unnecessary when a quick and harsh EXPLAIN!! Would have been sufficient. Of course all this is just my opinion the story is still great keep it up. Ja Ne.


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