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Naruto: The Outsider's Resolve: CH_111 [UPDATED]
🕑 Added 2023-04-11 15:04:03 +0000 UTCTakuma sighed as he knocked on the heavy metal door, uncharacteristic of a grocery store’s back door. The sun had long set down, and he was hungry because he hadn’t had the time to have dinner— but here he was, hungry and exhausted after a day’s worth of hard work, most of it spent outside under the sun.
He heard a pair of footsteps that abruptly stopped. The slot in the door slid open, and the man behind the door sighed before opening the door. Unfortunately, the guard behind the door wasn’t the only one in the corridor; another man stood in the middle of the corridor.
He and Takuma met eyes, and almost straight away, the other man clicked his tongue upon seeing Takuma and walked past him, exiting the building with a displeased face. Takuma didn’t say anything or acknowledge the man and simply fixed the mask over his face that imparted him another identity.
The fact that he hid his face didn’t sit well with many of the dealers under Ryuu; they didn’t like to be so closely connected to someone they didn’t know anything about. Takuma couldn’t blame them, and as long as they didn’t mess with him, he didn’t mind facing their displeased reactions from time to time. However, if they tried to disrupt his business, he would find where it hurt most and strike them there.
Ryuu’s grocery store acted as a front for his drug dealing business. The first floor ran a profitable grocery business, while the basement was the drug shop that racked in even more, selling a commodity with a demand that never seemed to dwindle.
Takuma walked down the familiar stairs to the basement almost every week to renew his stash; it was a bother to visit every week, so much so that he had arrived today to increase his order so that he could cut his visits to every other week.
In the basement, one of Ryuu’s men acknowledged Takuma.
“Late, aren’t ya, Tobi.” While many disliked Takuma, he wasn’t without ‘friends.’ Some people were civil with him, and he usually only interacted with people.
“Work’s a bitch,” said Takuma, his voice distorted. He handed the man two thick stacks of cash and told him the order.
“Oh? This is more than usual,” said the man as he counted the cash, “and you’re getting more of the better stuff today, huh.”
“Got me a few folks who can afford the better stuff,” replied Takuma. There were different strains of weed, some more potent, some providing a different experience than others— people had their preferences, and they had their budgets. Recently, Takuma had found a few clients who could afford the better stuff, and he was more than happy to fulfill their demands because the better quality always had a better margin.
The man took out the produce, weighed it, and packed them in zip-lock bags before handing them to Takuma, who double-packed them in heavy-duty zip-lock bags. With the exchange done, Takuma was about to leave when the man spoke to him,
“The boss wanted to see you.”
Takuma looked deeper into the large basement, where a small office made from sheet metal stood. After their first meeting, Takuma had only met Ryuu occasionally̦— once a month on average. Other than those, he usually only dealt with Ryuu’s underlings who worked directly for him.
“Why?” asked Takuma. “Did he say why he wanted to meet me?”
The man shrugged his shoulder as he marked some entries into a ledger. “If he did, he didn’t tell me. You should hurry, it’s already late, and I doubt he’ll be happy if you keep him waiting much longer.”
Takuma sighed. He was tired and wanted to go home, but he couldn’t say no to his supplier. He walked to the office and knocked on the door.
“Come in.”
Takuma stepped inside the room and was immediately hit by a sweet smell lingering in the room. His eyes went to a candle sitting in the corner of the room, releasing wisps of smoke. It was a special-made candle crazy effective at getting rid of smells— one of Takuma’s best-selling accessories that he had to buy from another shop to sell to his clients.
“You wanted to meet?” he asked.
“Sit,” Ryuu said from behind his desk. He read an old leather book with a title that Takuma couldn’t spot because of the faded leather. “How’s the business going?”
“Decent,” said Takuma.
Ryuu chuckled, “Don’t say that to other people.”
“What’s this about?”
“In a hurry, are you?” Ryuu looked up from his book.
“It’s getting late, and I’m sure both of us want to return home now.”
“That’s why I like you, kid. So straight to the point, it’s refreshing,” Ryuu closed the book and looked up at Takuma. “I want you to do something for me.”
“I refuse,” Takuma directly shot down the topic. “We are supplier-and-dealer. I pay you upfront, and you give me the product. There’s no need for anything to be added to our dynamic.”
“Well, things change, kid. It’s the natural world order,” said Ryuu, unperturbed, “and if I say I want you to do something for me, you don’t have a choice in the matter.”
Takuma’s eyes narrowed behind his mask. “What if I refuse?” he asked.
Takuma didn’t see this coming. Until he had stepped into the office, nothing had given him any inkling regarding the current situation. He would’ve prepared in some ways if he had seen it coming. Even though he didn’t know what Ryuu was asking him, Takuma did not doubt that it would be bothersome.
“If you refuse, we end our little business right here,” said Ryuu with a smile. “I like you, kid, but you aren’t an easy one to work with. In our business, trust is everything— and there are things that give substance to that trust, which you don’t really have. I love working with you, and you’re a good customer, but the fact remains that I know nothing about you, and you know everything about me— who I am, where I work, who I deal with…. That’s not fair, don’t you think?
Simply put, I need the incentive to put myself at this risk.”
Takuma felt his heart grow heavy. He had finally begun to feel comfortable with dealing and had built a good amount of repeat customers who were coming back in their cycles, which brought him a reliable income.
He had moved to a new stage in his career and life— however, things hadn’t changed much from before. Before Takuma had joined Iruka’s team, he was like any Genin Corp genin who took a comfortable base pay and tried to bolster it with a day-in-day-out series of D-rank missions that paid peanuts.
Then Enomoto gave him the ticket to the Ring, another avenue to additional income— which he didn’t see for three months, but at that time, he didn’t have a need for it, and when the bulk pay hit, he had utilized the mission points to buy himself a new set of shiny jutsu while keeping the cash in the bank to collect some interest. However, that money wasn’t given the time to collect as the entry to the Ring’s weapons category brought an additional expense in the form of Sango’s treatments. With a bump in lethality, he needed support that would allow him to keep fighting and maintain a normal life, but that support was costly, and it quickly ate into that cash pooling sitting in the bank.
If it were just that, Takuma wouldn’t have many problems. His other source of income was enough for a comfortable life— not one of luxury and indulgence, but one where he wasn’t sacrificing basic creature comforts— the stable infusion of C-rank missions under Iruka brought an income higher than most Genin Corp genin.
However, he had more expenditures. Ring provided him an opportunity to improve his combat prowess while earning— other skills weren’t so ‘giving.’
Improvements cost money.
Learning new things costed money.
If he wanted to work on his shurikenjutsu skills, he needed to book training facilities with moving targets, plus the buying and maintenance costs of kunai and shuriken that would chip and bend after repeated use. Locksmithing required him to buy new locks to keep himself up to date. Working on safes had him pay experienced locksmiths for their time and access to safes to practice on. Training facilities for his work towards seeing in low visibility costed money. New high-quality maps for cartography were costly as he built his collection.
Takuma was even learning how to ride a horse on the weekends because no other shinobi seemingly knew how to, and he thought it to be a unique skill in case he needed to pretend to be a civilian merchant. He had recently enrolled himself in a class that taught how to work a field radio for communication and had bought himself a second-hand radio for practice that took a lot of space in his small house. Similarly, he had worked on Morse Code proficiency during his first year as a genin, which had similarly cost money.
He attended the first-aid and other field emergency treatment classes in hospitals for practice because the last time he had stuffed gauze into an open wound in a foreign land, it was overly messy, revealing that attending those classes once wasn’t enough and that he needed practice. Those classes were quite affordable, but they still costed some money.
There were ten other things that poked tiny prick-sized holes in the water bag known as his ryo reserves.
Working in the police force came with yet another set of requirements that had him learn new things—the training period had felt like he was back in school with a lot of theoretical (and practical) learning regarding how to investigate and process crimes and the shinobi law.
He had books that the Police Force gave him free of cost, and his status as a shinobi and Police Force member granted him access to the general shinobi libraries and the Police Force archives— but that didn’t mean he didn’t need to buy new books which he always needed on hand due to their importance. Those books, once again, were expensive.
In this world, Takuma realized how lucky he had access to the internet, where he could access a seemingly infinite amount of free information and knowledge at his fingertips—without that all-important utility, accessing various resources costed money if he wanted to learn anything.
If he could choose one to live his life by, then it would be Maruboshi’s words that Takuma spoke to himself every day:
‘—A shinobi is more than the chakra he wields—’
And thus, he couldn’t stop learning.
He couldn’t afford to let go of the drug dealing money because it freed money that enabled him to continue learning. The Police Force might have been a big step forward for his career, but when it came from a monetary standpoint, Takuma had only gotten a 10-15% pay hike from his Team Iruka days— the Police Force had used their reputation, and the current political unrest to lowball their new recruits, who couldn’t say anything in the face of the great opportunity they were given. Takuma was one of the lucky ones, the special recruits, who had gotten any pay hike— most of them were either earning as much or lower than before.
Mission points might be an important currency in the world of shinobi, but cold hard cash (ryo) still made the world go around. Civilians and practically every career genin preferred ryo because the former couldn’t use mission points, and the latter no longer used mission points as much.
Mission points could be used to buy equipment and other things, but Takuma had decided to earmark every single mission point for jutsu purchases— and nothing else.
As it stood, Takuma was living paycheck to paycheck with close to no ryo savings— and Takuma didn’t care about savings that much as he thought investing himself was better, but that didn’t mean he didn’t understand the importance of saving money for a rainy day.
Drug dealing was finally begun to grow to a level that he could actually save a little bit.
He weighed the pros and cons, and the result told him that the best possible thing for him was to stay with Ryuu and continue. Changing things now would halt his business, tear his clients away from him, and would set him back several steps that would be a pain to climb back up.
“So be it,” said Takuma as he stood up. He would build his business back up. “Short it may be, but it was a good run. I wish you continued success from now.”
He would go to Enomoto and have the chunin introduce him to one of the other suppliers under Enomoto. Ryuu wasn’t the only one who bought from Enomoto; there were a couple more suppliers who bought from Enomoto.
“Did you never think why Enomoto brought you to me?” Ryuu asked as Takuma turned his back to him. Takuma paused with his hand on the doorknob. “You’ve been doing this long enough to understand how unique your position is. Do you think someone else would be willing to work with you without knowing your identity? Do you believe Enomoto would vouch for you another time?”
Takuma bit the inside of his cheek.
He couldn’t deny Ryuu’s pointed questions. In the several months he had been dealing, he hadn’t met a single dealer, no matter the supplier, who hid their identity as he did. It was because of Enomoto’s vouching that Ryuu accepted Takuma. And as Ryuu said, the chances of Enomoto vouching for him another time might not work if the supplier didn’t want to work with Takuma. Enomoto couldn’t –wouldn’t– force them. It was bad business.
“As far as I know, I was the only one even willing to meet with you when Enomoto told us about your condition,” Ryuu continued. “How do you think it’ll look to others on the outside when they see you and me fall out?”
It’d be terrible.
As Takuma began to rethink his decision, he realized that he was being overly optimistic. His one advantage had become the biggest hindrance, keeping him from moving on.
“Sit down, kid. If you leave now, even if you agree later, the offer will be closed,” Ryuu said, and Takuma had no choice but to sit back down. “The way I see it— you get to keep your identity a secret, and I get a little something out of it. Disagree if you will, but this is your best option.
You’re a shinobi; treat me as a patron and what I ask you as a mission. It’s simple if you look at it that way. In return, just like a patron, I’ll pay you in the form of a discount on the product.”
Takuma disagreed wholeheartedly, but he sat down.
“What’s the job?” he asked.
“I want you to deliver something across the village.”
“Why can’t your people do it?”
“Because my men are known for their association with me. We can’t be connected to this. You, on the other hand, are an unknown; change your look a little bit and drop the package at the destination— nothing more, nothing less.”
“What’s in the package?”
“The less you know, the better for everyone,” said Ryuu.
“This has been great.” Takuma stood up. “I’ll not do a job if I don’t know everything about it.” He understood where Ryuu was coming from, but after the Land of Frost, he preferred to know more, even if that knowledge later became a curse later on.
Ryuu didn’t say anything.
Takuma shrugged and moved to exit the office. It was a pity that he would no longer be able to work with Ryuu, as that was the most stable thing for him in the drug business. He knew that the chances of getting another supplier were on the floor.
Even if he revealed his identity and became like every other dealer wouldn’t work because when people knew that he was in the Police Force, they wouldn’t touch him with a ten-foot pole.
It was over…
“Food pills and other medicinal mixtures.”
Takuma’s lips quirked briefly up behind his mask before he turned back and sat down.
“Who’s the recipient?” asked Takuma.
“You’re to drop the package in a location. Someone will collect it after you’re gone,” said Ryuu.
Takuma let the room sit in silence as he matched his eyes with Ryuu.
Ryuu sighed, “Are you sure you want to know, kid? Sometimes it’s better not to know and leave things behind.”
“I don’t want to do this, but if you’re going to have me do this job, I need you to answer all of my questions,” said Takuma.
“The Maiko Triad,” answered Ryuu.
Takuma’s eyes narrowed when he heard the name. He knew about the Maiko Triads from both his time as a dealer and from the information binders he had to memorize during the Police Force training period.
They were dangerous people; some very not nice shinobi.
Takuma’s eyes shined.
“Alright, let’s do this,” he said.
“I knew you wouldn’t refuse me, kid,” Ryuu’s words along with a few chuckles followed Takuma as he walked out of the office.
Takuma looked up at the starry sky outside and sighed as he lit a blunt.
He had agreed with Ryuu, but that didn’t mean if he was going to do it. From the looks of it, he most probably was going to do it— but not before he paid Enomoto a visit to see if he could get some help from that avenue before he was forced to fulfill his commitment.
He felt twice as fatigued as before, but his appetite had been thoroughly killed.
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AN: The chapter has been re-worked. From the comments, I realized I hadn't really explored Takuma's financial situation. And hadn't really ever explained where Takuma spends all of his money.
Also, right now, it may seem that this doesn't benefit Takuma in any way, but it's actually something that open a new avenue for Takuma— not related to drug dealing, which we will see in the coming chapters. And this all is actually setting up a base for the following ARC, and I promise you it'll be worth it. You don't even need to wait for the next ARC for the payoff— it'll come in this ARC itself.
Comments
apl123az
Alright, the new bits goes a long way in explaining things. I was going to say you should make another pass to smooth things over, but it looks like you've beat me to that. Still, I did notice you're using 'costed' in some spots that should be just 'cost'. If you're going to make further tweaks, my one suggestion would be to keep as much of the skill list as you can. That's vital information for the reader. Even if it does ultimately start distracting from the chapter itself, getting that information out there could help set you up later.
Jair Marinho Cardoso da Silva Júnior
The ring is training for him. It was mentioned a few times, without a Sensei, the ring is the best way to grow his combat skills. Remember, he is getting ready for cannon. And he knows how absurd the enemys get.
Maracuya
Yeah, I had a similar thoughtas Martha. For me I don't see how staying in the ring would be a significant enough payoff worth the danger of being discovered by the Uchiha but maybe he has become arrogant.
I feel like you decided you wanted to write a drug dealing subplot and kept it going despite the circumstances of Takuma's life having changed wildly since he first started the side job. Takuma has a real job now and as far as we know, he's pretty good at managing his own finances on top of his winning streak in the Ring How much is he spending on healing that this job is required for him to stay afloat? The drugs aren't funding him with mission points for jutsu either. I don't think it makes a lot of sense for him to dig even deeper just because a druglord gave him an ultimatum. On one hand I can see Takuma being very tunnelvisioned and refusing to look at the very real alternatives to this situation but I'm also not sure I buy why he's insisting so hard on this. I think the Ring is already a great way to write about the underbelly of Konoha that you don't need to have a second avenue with this other subplot. You may be spreading yourself too thin considering the threads you've already laid out. We currently have: 1) Takuma's new Uchiha job and the series continued march to the tragedies of canon, 2) The Ring as a side plot, 3) his slowly growing circle of friends and allies, 4) his mysterious past and scarred body
