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Naruto: The Outsider's Resolve: CH_124

🕑 Added 2023-05-28 16:57:12 +0000 UTC

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FictionOnlyReader

My plan is to get him deeper into the "grime and mud." I have this vision for Takuma's future which I want to build. A certain-type of character which I have always liked in media, which I'm trying to build through Takuma. I won't say the details as it'll give it away. As for Takuma's goal. Survival is indeed up their on his priority, but at the same time, he isn't thinking about it. He's too busy in his day-to-day life to actually think about the big picture. It has been 2.5 years he has been in this world, and I would say the new world has started to affect him. He's turning NATIVE. He has become a shinobi, and he has begun to treat it like a job and his life— trying to move up in life through his career. Everyday this world chips away at the Takuma of the old— he's in the process of becoming just like everyone else. Note: I'm not saying he's forgetting his memories— only that his mindset is changing. He now has creature comforts, his personal and professional relationships, his financial well-being, among other things which all of ordinary people have, taking a large headspace. He knows what is to come, but doesn't have any ability to stop it, and is just doing everything he can while functioning as a productive member of the society. As he progresses, gets stronger, becomes more influential— that's when those big picture problems will start becoming a higher priority for him.

SleepySnake Zzzz

And on other not if you are going to make takuma be on the underworld side of things please have him go rouge and leave the village because as of now the underworld side of things are really boring to read and I find myself wanting to skip those parts every time they come up I think the underworld side of things will be much more interesting if he actually needed to use the underworld to survive rather then takuma just being in the underworld because the author wants him in there because that’s what it feels like

SleepySnake Zzzz

How old is itachi right now I feel like we’re getting close the the uchiha massacre like within a year or so. I mean Izumi graduated at 11 and she and itachi are about the same age give or take about a year if a year and a half has already past she should be about 13 now assuming itachi is a year younger 12 it’s about time for shisui to die to danzo. Or have you made itachi younger then that and he is like 11

Sebastian

Good to see a direct comparison to other members of his class. Can we expect Takuma to become deeply entrenched in the criminal world, or could he end up turning things around on Enomoto and clear out corruption in the police force. I wonder what Takumas goals are in the short term as well as if he has any aspirations besides survive the coming world ending scenarios. Is he scared that since this is a semi au things will end badly for the world? Anyways great chap ty.


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