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Naruto: The Outsider's Resolve: CH_149

🕑 Added 2023-08-01 16:40:53 +0000 UTC

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Ramon Rodriguez

Good point that a sensor should have noticed a switch. But I thought he wasn't part of the Chunin fight. Him and the Inuzuka are fighting the genin.

triad

why does it seem like he hasn't learnt any new jutsu's in the 8months, shouldn't his progress and wealth allow him to learn far more by now?

SleepySnake Zzzz

Question how did the sensor not catch the fact that there was a clone. Even if he was a clone the entire time he still would have sensed the fact that there were two chakra signatures. I can accept that he used a clone to do the drop because he’s a rouge ninja but he shouldn’t have any effective methods to counter a sensor considering that they are rare and he shouldn’t ever expect to encounter one so he would have no reason to have been using any methods to counter a sensor. I enjoyed the fight scene I was fun to read got my heart pumping a little bit especially considering there are actual stakes and someone could die. But I agree with the others you shouldn’t stop a fight scene in the middle it make the story much less enjoyable if you were going to stop in the middle it has to be when the fighting pauses for a second like when takuma got pulled down and trapped and was about to be killed that would have been a good place to stop and the next chapter would be your different povs and completely finishing out the fight. That feels like it would have been better of course I would have preferred the entire fight in one chapter Lastly where are the genjutsus I need them


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