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Naruto: The Outsider's Resolve: CH_180

🕑 Added 2023-10-18 03:15:52 +0000 UTC

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GenericReader_n

Just a small grammar error: Takuma stands up and bows when apologising about offending Kameko's clan. He then shrugs about something, and is once again written to stand up and put away his scroll before leaving. He was already standing and even if he was awkwardly shrugging while bowing standing up and continued bowing, it's a tad confusing to say he stood up again; maybe you could say "Takuma straightened himself..." or something to that effect.

Martha p

you must change the numbering, the chapter numbering is chapter 180 not 179


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