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Naruto: The Outsider's Resolve: CH_192

🕑 Added 2023-11-15 19:06:04 +0000 UTC

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Javier Ricaurte

I understand there's a lot of things happening behind the scenes and that it has been weeks in Konoha, but narratively it feels a little bit fast that so many clans put their support behind the Uchiha and Danzo is already about to be dealt with. I think maybe you could add a bit of comments on the process? Like, Hiruzen commenting that that is a serious accusation, especially when the Uchiha are unlikely to share the letter that started their suspicions on the first place, but that they have been doing a secret investigation for a while to collect enough proof to at least convince the other clans that is something Danzo might do, maybe during the investigation they somehow find out the knife Takuma gave belonged to ROOT and use that to prove that he is at the very least against the interests of the village, or maybe just say that some clans plain don't like Danzo and are willing to offer support based on just that.

FictionOnlyReader

I was thinking about how would one go about ROOT. And ANBU came up naturally. Not only would Danzo able to operate while invading ANBU because he know how they work—but he also used the ANBU template, mixed in mind-fuckery into it, to create a new interation called ROOT.

Astral Aion

That background for danzo was a nice touch it definitely fleshes his character out a lot more


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