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Naruto: The Outsider's Resolve: CH_196

🕑 Added 2023-11-28 20:52:01 +0000 UTC

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SwiftFate

I really enjoyed this little divergence. I've always hated Danzo being used as a plotpoint in Naruto fics, making him this huge shadow looming over everything. While you haven't completely nullified him as a future obstacle, it doesn't necessarily have to be one for the MC to solve. He is much better positioned as an enemy in the sense that he's just another mook/pawn on the board. No different from characters like Hidan, or Kakazu etc. He's strong, he's a threat, but that doesn't make him any different to the countless other powerful Shinobi in this world. I also love the idea of a united Leaf. With the Uchiha still around, Itachi included, I feel like there will be a lot more for you to explore now and in the future. How different will the Leaf be with the clans united like that, and whole. They may compete, sure. But in canon, the Uchiha's loss kind of put a shadow on the village. It was so..split. Now? Policies can change, systems can be put in place where characters not just from the Uchiha, but even others, even civilians (thanks to the whole police force inclusion thing) will start to shine.

Anonimacho

This is not the multiple launch I was expecting. But at least you're still alive. By the way, the kamui needs to be nerfed, not buffed xD.


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