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Naruto: The Outsider's Resolve: CH_428: The Promised Revenge

🕑 Added 2025-09-15 22:23:03 +0000 UTC

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Xardas2995

Sorry about your loss.

triad

My boy grey finally going to open up soon

Broham

Ur the goat. Again, I am sorry about your loss and am truly thankful for your writing. It helped me when my dog died to take me to a new world and keep my mind off things. I hope writing takes you to a new place as it did for me.

Lazybeep

I am loving the earth spear jutsu

Dinon17

Agreed

Xardas2995

Fiction a couple more lines of Barbary and the captains reacting to Takuma's request to leave would have been gold.

Myrdin

I hope to see Danzo’s reaction next chapter, as well as Takuma talking with Grey about the project.

Xardas2995

I didn’t really think of Kon as a villain ever since the war. With TOR putting so much emphasis on realism the concept of a major villain is already not something I would expect. Ok there can be antagonists but it doesn’t have to be that there is one. Takuma’s enemy is Root which is a whole network. So not sure we need a “new” villain.

Xardas2995

I felt sorry for the brothers.

Sido

Thanks for the chapter, this and previous one are numbered as CH_427.

elijah pickett

Thank you. I those three ROOT agents sucked.

LOOKOUT

I half expected for someone to save kon last second But this is the best outcome. Literally did a little dance in my room when I saw that kon died lol.

TheFoolishConsort

Now that this hatchet lies six feet under, reduced to ash, may Takuma finally walk toward something brighter and healthier.

Dodgy

Love the anbu arc so far. Keep up the good work.

Mohammed Sheekh

And so ends the first major arc in takumas life, enomoto and kon both dead. The next villain can't be danzo since itachi, kakashi and hiruzen are still around. Excited for the next coming chapters

Roaring waters

Well done my boy. Rest easy and find solace in the fact you have gone above and beyond for this mission and your duty as a shinobi.

Siva Chandan Chakka

An end to a chapter in his life I guess.


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