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WotR Chapter 36: Rescue plans and Women of Negotiable Virtue

🕑 Added 2019-08-26 21:24:56 +0000 UTC

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William Fullerton

Should be "through her wooden shield"

William Fullerton

btw "An arrowhead emerged three inches through her this wood shield, stopping a hair’s breadth from Cal’s face."

Karolus

I think his use of bent this chapter is much less clever than it has been in the past. You should probably spend a bit more time emphasizing that he is being forced to use bent in a suboptimal manner and his clever plans are being deliberately denied

Ford-Thomas Frank Loveland

I mean nothing particularly stood out but it was a sllid chapter about how things are going. The prostitute was a nice touch

Macronomicon

I'm not particularly happy with that chapter. Anybody else feel like it was missing something? and if so, what?

Thundermike00

Lol, fucking idiot. That was too funny.


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