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Naruto: The Outsider's Resolve: CH_298

🕑 Added 2024-09-19 04:53:21 +0000 UTC

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Corvus

I love that you mentioned the varying levels of strength for ANBU agents. So many people just think ANBU means stronger than jonin or its just a jonin in a mask.

Kaelixor

I enjoyed it the pace was good.

SunGear

Thx for the chapter and it didn't feel slow to me reading it. It almost fell empty when I get to the end but it wasn't slow

HYP3R

I think it feels slow because we would expect more action from an ANBU test, but I agree with your narrative emphasis on the subterfuge. In a series supposedly centered around ninja, unseen and masterful assassins, very little of that was present. ANBU should be the peak of that stealthy, ninja-typical behavior. While this chapter may not have action, I do think that an emphasis on the subterfuge side of ninja combat is appropriate. I always thought it was a shame how ANBU were used as faceless cannon fodder in the source material, even though their reputation dictates they should be anything but that

Green0Photon

I guess what felt slow about it is that not enough happened. I almost expected another scene, of Anbu reacting to Takuma looking around the room. I mean, it's a classic way to end the chapter the way you did, so I get it, and it's not like there's anything significantly wrong...

Nate Drees

298?


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