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Naruto: The Outsider's Resolve: CH_331

🕑 Added 2024-12-23 16:42:34 +0000 UTC

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Alchem

As Horan already commented, it did feel like there was a lot of repetition regarding the aspects of jutsu scalability and why he chose the dragon scale jutsu. Very sensible choice by Takuma; probably didn’t need to be explained as much as it was.

Horan

Nice jutsu ! And i also like when you explore the power system. Yet i find this chapter to be your weakest one in a while. I cant exactly point why but i feel there was a lot of repeat ? Might be because its an infodump and you usually weave them in dialogues. All in all thanks for the chapter and great work.

DraponsArmy

I love it when you explain the power system! I'm exctited for what takuma will learn in this training arc.

Zeroguard

I like the fire dragon scales addition, its a nice utility fire protection jutsu. Hopefully Takuma's Yang affinity ends up being high so he can scale it up well

yosef melul

Noice


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