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Beta Chapter 5

🕑 Added 2019-06-18 18:24:41 +0000 UTC

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Macronomicon

Whoops!

Patrick C

Maybe instead of saying it brought her back to life just imply that it was a powerful healing item. I mean there is a lot of difference between something that can heal the dying and an item that can literally be the dead back to life. One just has to patch up the wound and replace the blood while the other must bring her soul back from the great beyond or whatever.

Kemizle

You switched Calvin’s name for Garth once...😑

Macronomicon

Lemme know if the necklace is too much. I backfilled it's existance in chapter one. It's supposed to be another hint that it's not a normal family. I also changed the Sultan word


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