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Naruto: The Outsider's Resolve: CH_416: Brewing Trouble

🕑 Added 2025-08-04 22:57:23 +0000 UTC

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Kyle Pemberton

Do not forget he has the shadow clones and massive Chakra reserves to train more jutsu more easily.

Ruben Smith

I'm just waiting for the training with the rest of his graduating class. Would love to see how hard Takuma just puts them down.

Dinon17

I feel like at this point it'd be safer to just kill him. He already had one failed attempt on him, numerous foiled plans, and not to mention the blood vengeance kon has. Danzo probably wouldn't wanna chance anything... and if he does than I guess the mind one will have relavence real soon.

Dinon17

I like the copper head suggestion, but I think Kestrel would eventually be wasted here. Considering all he'd need her for is mind reading, having her dedicated to his squad is a waste of resources when he could instead use her as callable resource. I think a better pick would be a person who is more used to dealing with Root/organisation's. Yamato/ a deep infiltration specialist. Some one who would be the best at thinking like root or, alternatively knows what to look for for finding spys. Ironically Kabuto would be fire here... if he wasn't a fudging rat.

Xardas2995

TLDR: Please Fiction don't finalize that Takuma only learns around 10 B rank ninjutsu already. I might interpret too much into a single paragraph. I feel a little worried about this pointing out of 5 B rank jutsu are a lot and that it will take time to master them and just in case some don't fit Takuma wants more passes. I know you put a lot of emphasis the big difference from just doing a jutsu without blowing up in your face to true mastery like Takuma having to go a large distance to actually use eight tentacles and coordinating them or having good aim as we were reminded in the last fight. Also your answer to me on discord that top tier chunin usually keep their number of B rank jutsu around 5 and fresh jonin usually have 5 to 6 B rank jutsu mastered. If I want to look at this positively I see it as a reminder from your side that B rank jutsu are hot stuff that usually divides the regular shinobi especially inside the chunin rank and the gifted and we should not start seeing them as somwthing that becomes everyday business. But I am worried since that context was not provided. Also the point about wasting jutsu access passes because some jutsu end up not fitting. This is fine and it it plausible. However, with Tapir and the free C rank jutsu to try out similar jutsu this risk should be minimized. It can still happen though. But I worry you plan to flush a couple down the drain to for balancing purposes. Also some B rank jutsu should have overlap. Just like Takuma did with the earth spike jutsu. Or when he trained on the hardening aspect it was said that he already had some experience with it due to his other ninjutsu. So unless the next B rank ninjutsu shares no overlap at all with the previous ones he has learned the time required to progress them should be less. I just feel like this paragraph is supposed to work as an early hint that Takuma will not go beyond 5 or 6 B rank ninjutsu he will actually end up mastering/using regularly which I would find disappointing. Like for water release alone we have AoE stuff like water dragon colliding water wave (Great Waterfall assuming it is not A rank here). Then we have Water Severing Wave. Maybe B rank jutsu like Spirit Water Wave. So basically piercing/cutting stuff like Danzo's vacuum jutsu. I think he could get 5 B rank jutsu in water alone that would all be rather useful. Maybe even a little more. Takuma plans to become more than a regular jonin to survive the challenges ahead. He should aim to learn more. The shadow clones give him an insane amount for training and I assume/hope that will increase more in the future so he has the time to learn more than the regular shinobi unless he suddenly goes crazy on other fields like sealing. It was awesome how Takuma improved his taijutsu and used Earth Spear and his augmentation here. Sorry for the rant but I feel a little worried that you already want to adjust reader's expectations on what Takuma will be able to learn in the remaining time downwards and have him go back/remain as a mostly taijutsu fighter who only uses ninjutsu occasionally as a finishing move or as support. At the start of his Anbu career it looked like he would branch out more since he had the resources available then. Just during his spar with Campbell it was mentioned that for Takuma kenjutsu was just another part of his arsenal. Just want to get this out now if this is not the author's attention or at least not finally decided yet. I might also interpet too much into this. Sorry if this comes across as demanding or something.

CrimiK

If Takuma has to form a three-man cell, the ideal combination would be Kestrel for investigation and Copperhead for healing. Takuma is a highly skilled investigator so having a Yamanaka to read minds and Copperhead to keep prisoners alive after a fight is ideal.

Focus Armstrong

Do you guys think Danzo would want Takuma dead or brought back alive to hypnotize him?

Arcdime

Or Lieutenant! Even Danzo seemed to think he's in that caliber.

Rod Padrean

This is sooooo goooood, I had a long day at work when I see the notification that you’ve posted I feel like the day couldn’t be that bad. thank you for the chapter

MathiasK

prepare the wheelchair

NDF 07

So he's being promoted to squad leader, nice.

Ben.K15

Odds are he’s only gonna get 1-2 choices on picking squad mates in the short term. He’s probably gonna get assigned to an existing squad that’s missing its Lieutenant. Kestrel would be a great pull to have, to have a witness to the new LT’s greatness, and for sheer utility. Maybe one other drawn from ANBU Tests. It’s unlikely he would be allowed to form a completely rookie squad as a fairly young and “inexperienced” officer

HYP3R

I hope Takuma gets to bring the Yamanaka with him to his new team- maybe there can be an arc where he selects his squad out of the ANBU tests? Could be a good way for us to look back and see how takuma has progressed (because he is a certified BADASS now!!!)

Ben.K15

Lieutenant. Currently he’s just a basic ANBU answering to LT Campbell. Now he will likely be given his own squad under Itachi if my hunch is right. Itachi is likely grooming him to be a rising star in ANBU, and by taking him under his wing, he gets some of the benefits

Nate Drees

Probably Tokubetsu with an intelligence specialization.

Mohammed Sheekh

Takuma gonna be promoted to captain?

piledriven

"But if they could simply grease the palms of the right person to make things happen while being reasonably cautious, they could remove remove that barrier." Theres an extra "remove" in the sentence. "That seemed enough for ROOT to" Incomplete sentence/paragraph. "I can't say for sure because I haven't interrogated him yet." Takuma was injured and tired after his fight. "In my opinion, I don't think he knew they were ROOT. As for how they convinced him? It probably wasn't that hard. He would've been able to earn much more through smuggling if he were the outpost leader. I think he was just a little pawn in the bigger " Last sentence is missing a concluding word (game or scheme).

Aleksandar Gojkovic

Time for a round 2 with Kon, lets gooooo Takuma being prauzed for gis prowess by big shots is such a satisfying thing to hear. Also, a bloody promotion, excellent stuff. Cant wait for tge next chapter. Cant wait for takuma to becomr Jonin and approach S rank. This will be THE shit! Keep it up! My subscription is worth every penny!

yosef melul

Assassination attempt part 2?

Siva Chandan Chakka

oh he is getting the attention now


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