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Chapter 183: Don’t Stop Me Now

🕑 Added 2020-06-15 23:47:25 +0000 UTC

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Ziggy

WHY DID YOU SAY THAT NAME

SunderGoldmane

Also, with his chimera ability it would be pretty awesome if he could figure out how to make his wasps breathe lightning. Imagine a swarm of wasps vs Force? But he’s probably not going to use wasps because that will definitely make this fight a demerit against Calvin’s faction.

SunderGoldmane

So there is a path through this mess where Calvin becomes the head god of the diocese pantheon after he breathes lightning and duals the diocese of force above the city. I’m rooting for that outcome.

Deinos

Heh nice last sentence and I'm happy you didn't let him say "Do you bleed?" because next thing he'd cry about Martha for no reason. Also wondering if he's not righteously upset about someone killing Kurawe, for all intents and purposes he could've been a real person like Baroke or some such.

What happens when the gods bleed?

Ryan Naquin

Calvin doesn't react well to people threatening to kill his friends. Force needs to die now.

Andrew

Thank you! I liked how the fight was written

0xFFF1

It's not stealing divine providence. Calvin's got the Ancient "Evil" Elliot in his head feeding him science from beyond the stars. If Elliot is stealing it, then so are the Diocese. Information wants to be free, bruh

Ford-Thomas Frank Loveland

Are you kidding. I love how Calvins abilities aren't just saying [Fireball] and blam magic blast composed of fire hits the closest enemy. They way he achieved countless different effects with a series of small changes is a delight to read

Macronomicon

Oh, and this marked the beginning of book number six. I change Word documents every 100k words or so because eventually the error catching software becomes overwhelmed by the size, and 100k is about the size of a book. so we've officially passed half a million words on this story! yay! (we passed a long time ago, but now it's official)

Macronomicon

One of the difficulties about writing a highly magical fight is that describing the half-dozen little alterations the character has to do to the surrounding to achieve the awesome effects. It seems like it might slow down the tension, describing all those spells, but I don't want to leave out how the effects are achieved because that feels like it would cheapen it somehow. Let me know what you think.


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