Wrote this for fun on saturday: Generic System Apocalypse

SunderGoldmane

I’m a smidge mad at myself for not reading this right away when you wrote it. But I’m also excited that I have loads of chapters to read now.

mhaj58

Epic harems are like the icing on the cake they make great stories funny

Macronomicon

Why, you craving epic harem?

Thundermike00

hey man, your not going to make this one into an epic harem are you?

Adrian Gorgey

I concur. Loving this

I enjoyed it as well and would further upgrade my monthly donation for more Macronomicon works

I'd read it

a passing Fnord

Seconded on upping donation level for more of Jeb.

Dee

Good writer writes well. More news at 11.

A disgruntled nondescript squirrel

Presenting the baron of the chocolate bar, duke of the candied almonds, defender of the great snickers bar! High King M&M!

Sebastian Viller

If writing this story is stress relief for you, please feed us starving readers more, sir. Hopefully it helps with the flow of ideas and structuring for WOTR as well, but honestly I'm just excited to read either!

Deinos

Damn now I want to eat me some M&Ms. Would be funny if you continued this - sort of - fan-fic parallel to his own, incognito - somewhat - but just Better :D

Jake

Who that is a fun read. you rocked your category goal that's for sure. Like everyone else i wouldn't mind reading more at all awesome. Just not at the cost of WOTR. Two novels sounds a bit heavy for you though Haha

R. R. Quan

When wake of the ravages is done. This better be next haha

Godlyskeleton

More plz

Jacob

Technically, it was a magic apocalypse that they just so happen to have a way of measuring magic that resemble a system

Jacob

May I have some more sir, also really like how you explain how he's the only one to have magic

Ok, I want- no. I NEED MORE OF THIS

Tyler Tate

This was great!

A disgruntled nondescript squirrel

ok so love it BUT please don't cock block and ending on your current fiction. At least give it a proper stopping point. You KNOW why I'm saying this. Also someone has been reading RISING FROM THE DEPTHS

Sean Quinn

I would up my donation level to get more of this. Because this, is gonna be EPIC! Smart old soldier gets magic and starts using it in all the most inventive ways and can't rely on his body because of a missing foot. This is the best 'dump a guy in the deep end' start to a System Initialization story I've seen yet.

Beeees!

yes.

drag0nreb0rn

Please continue!!!!!

Weeb Dealer

Outer Sphere was also a system apocalypse story, right?

Matthew Davis

Holy Crap, more. This is way better than so many of the, "I was just a regular teen, until the system came" stories.

Chris

Well damn, I was really getting into it and... end.

Joe ?

I'd enjoy reading more of this

Damn, I’d definitely keep reading this on a whenever the mood strikes basis.

The Shard

Agree, this was great, way better than the standard "I'll take an ax, and push strength". I would read as much of this as you write.

alethiophile

This is great and I want to see more of it.

Alston Sleet

Moooooore!

person1357

more please

Alex Matheny

I uh... know you said this would be it... but maybe with a time skip? we could get at least the ending of the tutorial? Please?

I second this. Very fun read

DeeSharkman

I'd read more of this if you want to continue