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Chapter 23: The Winner’s Circle
🕑 Added 2020-11-08 21:27:23 +0000 UTC“Oof!” Jeb was dashed against cold, hard ground, rolling over a couple times before coming to a halt. The floor was smooth under his skin. Matte, non-reflective black.
Still alive, Jeb thought, putting his shaking arms underneath him. Being capable of conscious thought was an excellent sign of still drawing breath.
Jeb’s stump ached like it hadn’t in weeks, his limbs were barely strong enough to pick him off the floor.
I should be stronger than this, Jeb thought as he pushed himself up, nearly toppling back to the ground as he realized his peg leg had been flung off in the tumble through the sky.
He tried to lift himself off the ground with his Myst, but Jeb’s core was no longer a burning star. It felt more like a ball of lead in his chest. Inert, heavy and cold.
Damnit, Jeb thought, sinking back down to his knees. It was easier and less humiliating than hopping in place.
Where the hell am I? Jeb thought, scanning the area. It was a featureless black void that seemed to stretch into infinity.
Did I get tossed into the Dead Zone or something?
No, that's not right.
There was something there, making Jeb’s eyes water and gum up as he tried to make sense of things his brain couldn’t fully fathom. It hurt to look at them, like ultraviolet light, causing pain but not causing his pupils to contract, because they couldn’t tell it was there.
Jeb’s heart kicked into high gear as he scanned the inky blackness and realized he was completely surrounded by these invisible things.
Is this where I get torn apart by extradimensional predators, like the langoliers or something? Jeb thought, staring hard at the invisible something directly in front of him, his heart trying to leap out of his throat.
No myst, but maybe I can dodge the first attack and hit them with a point blank fireball...Jeb thought, his thumb turning the rangefinder on his wand as he stared straight ahead, trying to maximize the pain and discomfort in his eyes, the only sense he had of the strange things surrounding him.
If the pain fluctuated, that meant they were moving. That would be the time to dodge.
Jeb’s breath came in fits and starts as the pain slowly grew, radiating through his skull until his head felt too small to contain it all.
Jeb felt a tickle under his nose.
He smelled blood.
“Ah, but it did happen, even if it mostly didn’t.” a faint voice echoed through Jeb’s ears and mind simultaneously. It was a woman’s voice, with a strange metallic tinge to it. It tasted like motor oil.
Jeb blinked his stinging eyes as the amorphous thing in front of him gradually faded into view.
A woman, perhaps twelve feet tall, with orange skin, wearing absolutely nothing. She was more intimidating than erotic though, as she had magnificent horns resting on the top of her head, black rings around her eyes and lips, and massive streaks of a black, tar-like substance seemed to ooze from her breasts and dribble down her body, smelling of brimstone.
Her hair was composed of thick black strands that gleamed with an oily residue.
Beside her was a pale, skeletal creature that reminded Jeb strongly of the operators in the treasure room. He was wearing rich gold and black silks that stood out against his pale skin.
The lipless creature glanced at Jeb and then above and behind him. Jeb followed the creature’s gaze and spotted more creatures sitting behind him.
A C.L.G. (Creepy Little Girl) sat on a cutesy chair, her clothes and furniture seemingly wriggling with barely contained tendrils of something not good.
There was a crag-faced man with thick scaly skin and no hair, scowling at the lipless creature over Jeb’s head.
“I agree, this may have occurred within a Pharos’ Knot, but it did happen, and frankly I’m more interested in seeing what happens if these humans are introduced to the world at large.” The lipless creature said.
“Should we change the name then? Inordinately Difficult doesn’t have the same ring to it, does it? No, this tutorial was labeled as impossible because it’s never been completed.” The crag-faced man with no shirt said. “It should stay that way.”
“Besides,” the thick-skinned creature continued, pointing at Jeb, “they cheated.”
“You know as well as I do that there are no ‘rules’ to a tutorial. Only a goal and the tools to achieve it.”
“But they left the tutorial. That has to be cheating.”
“Once again, there’s never been a Law against it, because escape from the exclusion zone had never been done before. It was our failure to predict the possibility, not his.” The horned woman said, staring at the thick-skinned creature with the sharp teeth. “If there’s no Divine Law against it, it must be allowed.”
“No rule that says a dog can’t play basketball,” Jeb blurted, nerves getting the better of him.
“It can perceive us,” the C.L.G. behind Jeb said cheerfully. “Precocious little guy, isn’t he?”
The attention of no less than a dozen entities that Jeb was fairly certain could squish him like a bug were suddenly directed towards him in a focused way that made Jeb regret opening his mouth. Jeb’s teeth clicked together.
“Do you have anything to say, Jebediah Trapper?”
“If it’s not too much to ask, could I know what’s happening?” Jeb asked as politely as possible.
“You’re in between possibilities while we decide whether to destroy you.” The CLG said with a grin.
“It’s our job to prune the branches of existence every now and then,” The lipless creature said, looking down at Jeb. “We are deciding whether or not to allow this outlandish outcome where you successfully finished the impossible tutorial, to become reality.”
“Most Jebediah Trappers died, after all,” The thick skinned creature said, crossing his arms, which grated against each other. “Why should we go out of our way to fix this outcome as reality?”
“You’re just saying that because your pet projects performed better in different realities.”
The thick skinned creature grumbled.
A floating creature that hadn’t spoken until now raised its voice. It looked like dew on a spider-web, that glittered strangely in time with its words.
“The question you’re failing to ask is how did the paradox begin?” the dew-covered web spoke. “Paradox by definition is impossible without outside influence. While you were bickering, I traced the error back to its source. It was an information paradox, where Jebediah Trapper was informed of the existence of the treasure room by himself, who had already found it.”
“And?”
“And the first layer of the paradox was planted with powerful magic.”
The dew-web shone bright for an instant with the sound of inhaling.
“I smell Mab’s hand in this,” the creature spoke.
The mood suddenly turned dour. It was difficult to read the lipless fellow’s expressions, but the fractional narrowing of his eyes spoke volumes.
“Well, that makes this an easy choice,” The thick-skinned man said, a massive wooden branch manifesting in his hand.
The creature raised the log above his head, and Jeb got a real good view of a couple teeth embedded in the bark right before he brought it down on Jeb’s face.
Jeb flinched back and covered his head reflexively. Fat lot of good it’ll do, that thing’s the size of a tree. Jeb realized with horror that the last thought he’d ever have would be about the size of another man’s club.
“Hold!” The crude oil woman shouted, her hand interposing between Jeb and the club. “Have you forgotten so soon!?” She demanded.
Leatherface snorted. “I’d rather lose a pawn than risk giving that bitch one.”
“In light of the circumstances,” the lipless creature said. “I tend to agree with Erron. It would be safer to snuff out potential problems.”
“That’s the stance you’ve taken every time, and every time you’re made a fool of!” The oily woman said.
“Why don’t we put it to a vote, then?” The lipless creature said, glancing between the woman and the man with the club.
“Fine,” Leatherface rumbled, pulling the club away from Jeb’s face.
“I say we kill him,” He said. “Save us a lot of trouble down the road.”
“Agreed,” The dew-web chimed along with him.
“Risking allowing one of Mab’s plans to come to fruition is a needless risk. Kill him.” The lipless creature gave Jeb a glance. “Apologies.”
“This is another of her tricks to sow discord and cripple our future allies. Let him live.” The oily woman said.
“My domain is Reward. I cannot abide this man going unrewarded for his efforts in conquering the Impossible Tutorial. Let him live.” A man-shaped cloud of stardust that had remained silent until then spoke.
Jeb listened carefully, tallying like he’d never tallied before as the creatures – gods? – around him continued to vote. When it finally made it back around to the C.L.G, the vote was tied.
Jeb held his breath as his fate rested in the hands of a creepy little girl that seemed to writhe just beneath the surface.
“Well, with Kes'thuali’s vote, that makes six for destroying him,” The man with the club said, lifting his tree trunk before the CLG had even said a word.
“Let him live.”
The creatures around him froze as one, staring at the C.L.G. dumbfounded.
“You want to…not…destroy something?” The oily woman asked, frowning.
The C.L.G. slowly smiled, revealing a mouth full of needle-thin teeth, bending inward. “Why, is it not my prerogative to dole out destruction as I see fit? That should include not destroying, shouldn’t it? This seems like more fun in the long run. One way or the other.”
The giant leather-faced man growled and slammed his club into the black floor, causing it to ripple like water beneath Jeb for an instant.
“Fine! He lives! But a potential pawn of Mab’s can’t be allowed to roam around with so much potential. Humans have no natural talent for Myst, so if we sever him from the System, that should limit the amount of trouble he can cause.”
There was a general murmur of assent, nodding of heads all ‘round as Jeb’s gut sank. They weren’t gonna kill him, but tossing Jeb back into an earth in the middle of apocalyptic upheaval filled with superhumans was like plucking a turkey before throwing it to the wolves.
“Very well, we are in agreement that this corner of the cloud be instated as the new Center, and to remove the effects of the System from this human.” The lipless creature spoke, glancing at Jeb. “Good luck, Jebediah Trapper, and congratulations on passing the Impossible Tutorial.”
The lipless, white-skinned man reached a gnarled finger out and poked Jeb in the forehead, dousing Jeb’s body in cold for a fraction of a second before his consciousness fled, leaving nothing but –
***Jeb***
Jeb briefly had the sensation of falling, before his back slammed into something soft. He bounced back upward, flailing, as he tried to process everything at once. A moment later he slipped off the edge of the bed and tumbled onto the ground, his nose filled with the ashy scent of cheap drive-in motel carpet.
Jeb put his shaky arms underneath him and propped himself up to his knees, glancing around.
The same motel room? he thought, scanning the room, gaze landing on Frank’s thick black glasses on the end table. Am I back?
Was it all an ecstacy dream? Is that a thing? Maybe they got a bad pill, or somebody switched it with LSD. That makes more sense than magic, fairies, and Earth getting stitched onto another planet. I’m sure Frank will come out of the bathroom at any second with a glass of water or something.
Jeb itched his stump.
He glanced down, icy cold settling on the back of his neck as he took in the most powerful evidence that it wasn’t a dream.
Jeb’s right foot was AWOL.
His beard was nearing a month old, his hair was shaggy and felt like dog fur, his clothes were totally different than the ones he’d been wearing at the beginning, covered in wounds and monster blood.
“Damn,” Jeb grunted, pushing himself up to his foot, looking around for something to serve as a crutch or cane.
Congratulations Earthlings! A group of humans have completed the Impossible Tutorial. The gods of Pharos are deeply impressed.
“Gah,” Jeb blinked the words out of his sight moments before another text rolled in front of his eyes.
Representatives of Mestikos are now going to stream a live interview with their leader, the man who achieved this historic event, the pinnacle of humanity.
Jeb glanced around, but didn’t see any ‘representatives of Mestikos’ there to interview him.
Suddenly an image appeared on the wall in front of Jeb.
There, displayed on the wall in front of him, was Freeman, looking distinctly uncomfortable, trying to sit in a chair that was much too small for him.
“Were m’I s’posed ta look ‘gin?” Freeman asked. “‘Dere? Dat’s a camera? Don’ look like any camera I eva’ seen.”
Jeb couldn’t help but laugh as the old man gave the camera a nervous smile, his few remaining teeth making an appearance.
Pinnacle of humanity, indeed.
The interview was colorful, and Jeb watched it while he tried to pry a pipe off the cheap headboard to use as a cane. They asked questions like, ‘what was it like’, ‘how many people were in it’, ‘where was it,’
Jeb was surprised to realize it was the first information the public had gotten about the Impossible tutorial in…ever.
Finally they came to the end of the interview while Jeb was wrapping a length of cloth around the top of the pipe to stop it from biting into his palm.
“So, Freeman, how did you manage to beat the impossible tutorial?” the lipless alien said, holding a gem closer to Freeman.
“Me?” Freeman asked, cocking a bushy grey brow. “Ah didn’t beat it, ah got lucky. Dere were alotta tuff sumbitches in dere, and the toughest one o’ all is de one what beat dat fools errand. Ahdunno why e’ ain’t here wit us, but de sumbitch who actually beat it, his name is –“
The picture blinked out.
Hmm…politics, maybe? Jeb didn’t know whether to be insulted or relieved that they censored his name. Sure, it rankled, but Jeb’s goal had always been to survive, not win some kind of medal, and he’d done what he’d set out to do. Plus, without the System, he was a bit of a sitting duck, so the less people who knew who he was, the better.
Jeb could tell he didn’t have the System anymore. He should have been strong enough to tear the bed frame apart, but it took nearly ten minutes to wrangle his new cane off.
He should have been smart enough to know exactly what to do next, perceptive enough to hear what was going on outside without even trying.
The core in his chest should burn like a star.
Jeb hobbled over to the window, awkwardly putting his weight on the cane as he hopped.
He drew back the chintzy motel curtains and peered into the dark.
There was the familiar parking lot, filled with familiar cars, each of them looking as though they’d spent a month in the sun, rain and dirt.
Beyond the parking lot however, the land was drastically different. The lush Oregon wilderness had been replaced with arid desert. In the distance, Jeb could barely make out the glittering lights of a city where before, the view had been nothing but green mountainside.
“Guess we’re not in Kansas anymore,” Jeb muttered, back in survival mode. He couldn’t stay here and starve to death, he had to get to the city and take his chances, but first he had to take care of something urgent.
Joe hobbled out the door and down to the office of the building, where he came across a vending machine, taunting him with king-sized Snickers bars behind tough glass.
If the vending machine hasn’t been busted into, then this place probably hasn’t been raided by humans yet. That means…
Jeb hobbled behind the counter and into the office, and after a little digging through the supply closet, found an excellent crowbar, just the right size to serve as a new cane/weapon.
He took his new find back to the vending machine and smashed it in, squinting against the shards of glass flying through the air.
It took several good hits, and Jeb nearly fell over half a dozen times, but he finally got the glass out of the way of his prize.
Jeb piled snickers bars up in his hand then sat down at the creaky table in the lobby. He read the label, looking for weight.
NET WT 3.7 OZ
Let’s see, sixteen ounces to the pound. If we rounded up, it would be four bars. Four times point three is one point two, so a third of a bar remainder.
Jeb carefully stacked four Snickers bars on the table, then hacked off a third of the fifth one, setting it on top of the other four.
“All yours, Smartass.”
Jeb stared at the pile, but the fairy didn’t show up to claim her prize. Jeb had kind of assumed there was some kind of magical connection implied with the ‘one pound of candy per month’ deal. God knew he felt compelled to honor the agreement. He was hoping the fairy would be able to find him through it.
“Well, maybe there’s travel time,” Jeb thought aloud, glancing at the coffee machine as he scratched his stump. I wonder… he looked over at the other vending machine, narrowing in on the beautiful brown bottled coffee.
Coffee Good. Jeb need coffee.
He was about to get up and liberate something to drink from the neighboring vending machine, when he glanced back at the table and noticed that the one-third of a snickers bar had vanished.
“Smartass?” Jeb asked, glancing around the room. Nothing.
When he looked back at the pile, another of the bars had vanished.
“I see how it is,” Jeb muttered, sitting back down and fixing his gaze on the candy.
He stared until his eyes went dry, and the three remaining bars stayed completely still. Jeb lost his concentration and blinked for a moment, and another bar vanished into the ether.
Only two pieces of chocolaty confection remained.
Jeb forced his eyes to remain open, watering as they dried out. Jeb knew there was something there, and by God, he was going to see it.
There was a pain in Jeb’s eyes that had nothing to do with keeping them open too long, it was deeper than that, throbbing back into his skull, which felt tight, like it was about to split open.
Exactly like it had before he’d seen those self-proclaimed gods. Exactly like it felt when he first chose to raise Myst.
Jeb groaned as he felt his skull crack open like an eggshell, too weak to contain something powerful inside any longer.
Blood tickled his upper lip before dribbling down to his chin as the air above the candy bars began to waver.
Crack!
There was a sound that was both heard and felt, physical and metaphysical, as Jeb’s Core began to move inside him, the ball of lead slowly gaining heat as it began to stir.
The shimmer in the air resolved into Smartass, her tiny mouth covered in chocolate and desperately straining to fit around the corner of a bar. Her belly was hugely distended, and she seemed to have trouble maintaining altitude.
“Wow Jeb, you look like shit,” Smartass said, sheepishly hiding the candy bar behind herself.
Jeb ignored her, and grabbed one of the sugar packets from the bin beside the coffee machine and dumped it out, staring at the grains of white powder on the cheap pressboard table.
Jeb took a deep breath, and siphoned Myst with everything he had, aiming at the near-weightless, tiny grains of sugar. His Myst was dull and unresponsive, leaking only the tiniest amounts of Myst from his core, and his draw was weak, the massive steel pipe he’d grown accustomed to using had been replaced with a flimsy plastic straw.
Jeb took that tiny hint of Myst around his core and siphoned it out into the real world, solidifying a piece of telekinetic force small enough to nearly be imperceptible.
Jeb broke into a cackle as he mentally pushed a thin line through the grains of sugar, his Myst weak as an insect.
No natural talent, my ass, Jeb thought, shortly before his eyes rolled back in his head, slamming his face into the sugar as he passed out.
Comments
Macronomicon
currently editing. Adding in stuff here and there as I go. That got added hours before the royalroad one went up, and even more changes are being made for the kindle book version.
Jose Cordones
Papu, lo que publicaste en RR tiene más contenido que esta, como un mini epilogo de Casey. What you just published in RR has more content than this one, like a mini epilogue for Casey.
Pike
Just give him back the normal system.
Althaelus
Yeah I feel that. Especially the comment on how they should kill him so the tutorial just stays the impossible tutorial. Sounds like a group if people in need of a good culling.
SunderGoldmane
Started from the bottom and now we’re back. Yes!
Im the smallest peach
I was hoping for some foreshadowing in the end. If someone fucked up my world, threw me into a hell hole that no one is expected to escape from, escape from it and end up crippled both physically and systematically as a reward I would be at least mildly annoyed.
Scipio
I think that the wording of the god of reward implies that he'll give Jeb something as a reward for actually completing it, not just simply surviving. Survival was a win condition, not a reward. In order to win, you *had* to survive, therefore it can't be the only reward gained. At least, if I was a god that managed rewards and odds that's how I would see it.
Macronomicon
You should know me better by now.
Chad B. Sonnen
Too bad. I was hoping for him to evolve and adapt his current cercumstances to become a Brad He-Man, and not again as some harry potter wannabe.
Jonathan Grant
Is the one type of spell per core a system limit? Because then a systemless human is a lot more interesting.
Andrew
Thank you!
Arnon Parenti
It's missing hope, you could show us a system message for Jeb's next quest, or something like a hacked system where he broke out of the Class system like a fairy... Something to make Jeb Trapper bigger than those asshole "divines".
drag0nreb0rn
They will never keep Myst from our Human savant. Nothing is worse than a human with a grudge.
Patrick Short
Thank you! Can't wait for more.
Arnon Parenti
If they think Mab was bad they hadn't met our boy Jeb when he's mad yet.
Macronomicon
Two chapters. Proof that I've been working. So this is the end of the rough draft. I might do a short aside to the other characters to give some kind of resolution for them, but that, i think is the end of book one for Jeb. I'm not 100% happy with it though, and if you come up with the kernal of an idea that I find better, I'll totally add it in. Was it missing... a sense of resolution? or something? I don't know. endings are not my strong suit, so hold my hand a little, here.
