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Chapter 256: Greater Maculat

🕑 Added 2020-11-18 00:48:33 +0000 UTC

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Andrew

Thank you!

Sean Field

As an aside, I feel like the maculat could have been written even a little more scary and heavy, but that may have been a bit much for your audience, if that were the case. I think you hit it pretty dead-on for riding the line of too much and not enough, if that makes sense. Like, Calvin et al now realize how dangerous him being a maculat can be now, but any more than what actually happened may have alienated some of your audience.

Alias

Can we have an update on Calvin’s stats soon? With the new break, I’d like to see how beefy he is now. Plus being a greater undead and all that. Thx.

Deinos

Hmmhmm *sagely nod* we're at the mind fucking stage of the relationship.

Macronomicon

Wha?

Macronomicon

Dude, you're right on the money. I originally planned for him to rape Learner whilst in the throes of mutation, then have them ride back together silently processing what just happened, but that was heavy. like, game of thrones heavy, and that's not really the level of heavy that WOtR was founded on. One day I'll be brave enough to have terrible stuff like that happen. I'm trying to have my cake and eat it too.

A disgruntled nondescript squirrel

maculat apparently when they ejaculate they do so in reverse ;)

Kiwilord

A rather soft landing for the change. I have no problem with the level of the whatever but I feel that going this route weakens the potential of this being an interesting 'internal nature conflict'. You may have to highlight the consequences somehow for the reader to take this threat seriously if that's what you want. That aside, the chapter was fun to read.

Chris

I just don't get how they can be two different people. Alter ego or whatever that can take part of his break. Taking his stats just don't make sense to me.

P Goldstein

It's certainly impactful. I think you captured the perfect leverage point between sexy and <i>'Oh SH*T!'</i>

0xFFF1

I think the important part is that while Maculat are BAD THINGS, it doesn't make Calvin a BAD THING, so long as he properly manages it. It's something that will consistently get in his way through compulsions and instinctual urges, while also giving him useful abilities that tempt him to not return to the land of the living. It makes for some good occasional drama without the story having to delve too deeply in ecchi and degenerate kinks. Calvin merely needs to keep on top of it. It's like a werewolf story, and those tend to be fine.

Sean Field

A maculat is absolutely terrifying, and I love seeing Calvin struggling to remain himself despite being the undead. I love that he immediately regrets his actions, and recognizes how dangerous it is. It may come with some great bonuses, sure, but I figure he's going to really look into how to un-undeadify himself now, or at least try to negate the negatives of it.

Macronomicon

This was a weird chapter to write. A maculat is a BAD THING that does bad things to women. so having the main character be one toes the absolute fine line of ecchi and rape-y. I don't know. You'll have to tell me how you felt about the chapter. Feel free to let me know in the comments. Love it, hate it, let me know one way or the other in the comments. If there's some minor detail or order of events that can make this work better, let me know as well, in the comments.


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