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Chapter 11: Buying Company

🕑 Added 2021-01-03 20:30:04 +0000 UTC

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Daniel D.

No

MsMonet

Fucking buy me. Fucking buy me right the fuck now.” Eddie said, holding his shackles out and wiggling his fingers." LOL TY for this. Never seen this before with MC buying slaves.

Ryan Naquin

But dont make the void saber a sword hilt with a hole at the end. People see you bringing up something with a hole in it and expect something to come out. Make it a little dagger with the void blade starting after the knife blade. People know what a knife is and know it cant hurt them from a few feet away and they would be dead wrong

Macronomicon

dude. Cooool!

Anon

I got something to add to the annihilation lens gun mentioned a few chapters ago. If you set a minimum and maximum range just a few feet long and oscillate the lens a few hundred or thousand times/s, you could make a voidsaber. Maybe add a control lens to switch between the two gun/saber mode so Jeb won't have to make two items.

A disgruntled nondescript squirrel

how large is this magic world, I mean for comparative sake if everyone isnt freaking out due to a huge population growth it must be the size of Jupiter to sustain a huge enough population in a medieval society on that scale

HenryMorgan

An explanation as to why certain hyperbolic language isn't detrimental to his Impact gathering would be nice. Its a small quibble, i can ignore it.

Macronomicon

I know at least one other person that knows how to do it.

Adam Roundfield

Gamma radiation lens...

Adam Roundfield

Information lens might be dangerous, maybe rename it a seizure lens.

Adam Roundfield

Unlimited range... Sounds like you have never talked to a helicopter maintenance specialist...

Adam Roundfield

I get the impression that bump has some forget me now shenanigans going on...

Scipio

I mean, if you think about it, there were certainly people in the tutorials who understood myst, but how many of them actually had experience combining different lenses or altering premade items. How many tutorials lasted long enough for that? How many of the people who went down the myst route survived? How many people realized the physics behind them. Like sure, knowledge of them is common place, but to alter items, understand the focus and calibration properties of lenses takes a substantial amount of time and access to the items involved (or less time + a high nerve). We know that most people who exist are below level 20(since they dont have classes), and it seems unlikely that the gods or government would let a bunch of level 20-50 humans waltz right through the already established lands to set themselves up easily.

LifeOfConfusion

O_o ooh, what about Google or the library of Congress or the Smithsonian. Knowledge, book and information lens.

LifeOfConfusion

Plus any Powerstation or nuclear powerplant should have electricity lens to run things, fortnox for gold etc

LifeOfConfusion

Also, with the kerosene lense you could get a helicopter or an osprey up and running, with virtually unlimited range

Ellija

I wonder if the gambling addiction lens could be used to make people make unwise bets with unfavorable terms. Seems like it could be a decent way to skim some impact.

LifeOfConfusion

The second idea was to make squads of people to go out and look for lens, or hunt bounties and bandits. More of a paramilitary group. Same deal with the oaths, so that if or when they try to cheat him out of his cut, he can gain impact. If they don't break the deal, then great, but otherwise relying on people's poor nature's. He could also use them to power LVL people into classes that he guides them into.

LifeOfConfusion

I had two kinda related ideas. The first is making a chop Shop/ salvage yard. Basically using the gas to drive generators and machines at the shop, and trucks and equipment to bring them in. Then when hiring them make them sign a deal with Jeb. When they steal something or talk about something they shouldn't, Jeb can havest them for impact.

Ricky Kukowski

Thanks for the chapters. I am curious about the bump on his head. He should have had some time to examine it especially during the caravan or the weeks traveling alone.

Adam Roundfield

These chapters make me happy.

A disgruntled nondescript squirrel

so when I read the list of some of the items he found, I had this funny thought it made me laugh. if he combined the buck with the exotic dance lenses would he get a stag party or just male stripper deer

Gerald Monroe

I really liked how you avoided 2 cliches. Not only did he not purchase any sex slaves, but the most skilled man he can get is old enough to have actually acquired those skills. In most fiction, improbably pretty 24 year olds have every technical skill imaginable at a master level.

Dee

Really kilo king forward to this arc. Happy new year!

Joshua Flowers

Maybe? I feel like that only works between practitioners of Fae magic. Telling people how you obtain impact also has a lot of risks involved.

Joshua Flowers

I'm pretty sure the amount of impact he can make from these people is practically non existent. He needs a challenging target and a target he can trick into losing something more than what is described in the confines of the deal or through consequences of breaking said contract. I don't think taking tribute from slaves he bought would amount to anything.

Morog T Tiny

I think he is making too many promises without gain to himself. Doing good deeds without his own personal up side. he should be gaining promises from those he bought and delivering on them.

Toknightly

Could he make a deal when he frees them for like 5% of their future impact like he does with smartass

ciopo

Thank you for the chapter. I'm a bit unsure about some of the colorful language he has been using, like early on this chapter when he first interacted with the slaver employee, shouldn't his use of metaphorical "shit" have pinged on the "tell no lie"? I like consistency and I like banter, but in this case the story requires him being very very careful in how he talks!

Enzo Elacqua

It’s be cool if in this story there was a heavier focus on personal improvement, then massive societal change. Which the fae contract seems to be pointing to.

Enzo Elacqua

I’m glad Jen realized the potential of all this stuff. My only hope is that you don’t make it be that he’s the only one, like in outer sphere. Assume the guy is lucky and smart sure, he is the protagonist after all. But I would hate to see this declive into another empire building scheme because of that.

Andrew

Thank you!


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